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The Whithered Rose

Young and thorny she is a sight.
Peaceful outside, inner fight.
Anger came and beat her down.
In misery, without friends, she would drown.
He poured his rage, and burned her petals.
The way fire melts down precious metals.
It feels as though a knife is in her heart.
Her life, it seems, has fallen apart.
But, for her, there is hope yet.
On her friends help, she can bet.






              (For Amanda, our Rose)

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  1. Date: 11/15/2008 7:37:00 PM

    hi Leah, thanks for you comments on my write humble prayer, and I am sending good thoughts your way, hope that all is well with you, take care D-ncye

  1. Date: 11/14/2008 8:53:00 AM

    beautiful. JHL

  1. Date: 9/18/2008 4:18:00 PM

    hi Leah, I am okay, thanks for asking, and I hope that you are well also, love this write of hope, and faith and strength, we all need this formula, take care and I hope that all is well, D-nyce

  1. Date: 9/17/2008 9:15:00 AM

    God Bless, Leah. It would take a lot of courage and support to come out of that situation. True friends are important. A rose is a rose. Vince