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BABY

His fingers tremble
As he holds the scan
A shadow image
In an inky cloud  
“See there’s a backbone”

Though just a smudge
You have begun
To live your life
Full of promise

Unaware
You lie curled
Not knowing

You’ve changed
The world

Now

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  1. Date: 9/29/2009 2:06:00 PM

    great stuff Maggie. x

  1. Date: 9/24/2008 11:18:00 AM

    First I must comment on the flow and contents - wonderful! Your message is clear and so easily understood through a terrific use of imagery and flow. Now, the 1st line second verse needs one more syllable, how about "Though just a smudge"? Otherwise a fantastic read. Michael

  1. Date: 9/9/2008 6:21:00 PM

    great introspective write, new life, new beginnings, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 9/8/2008 5:56:00 AM

    What a wonderful way to start the morning, to read this poem about a new life ...and yes! This brand new miracle will change someone's world! Good job! ~Carrie