Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

You Ripped My Soul

The heart is a fragile gift;

When it is broken, it can never be fully fixed,

And everytime it becomes whole again,

We cannot help but wonder when

It will fall to pieces once more.

Something precious hides in the core,

Solitude will protect its holes;

No way out unless we crawl,

Then once again we find a fault

That will turn the valleys winter cold;

Like a shadow, it haunts us. Torment

Bleeds our soul; alters the scent;

Hurts the body; controls the mind.

It forces us to cross the line

Into what is false and deceitful;

Where shallow waters drown the fool

That dared to break a heart in two.

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 9/4/2008 5:50:00 AM

    Wow you are a very profound poetess - I just love your work for it speaks to my spiritual side - Very truthful therefor powerful are your words - I'm so glad I stopped by your poems - Are you new? - I'm sure I would have remembered your work - I looked and you joined while I was on my treatments and rather ill - at any rate it's sure a pleasure to meet you now - God Bless