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Life

Life's like a boat, adrift in this ocean;
Í'm sailing by others in very slow motion.
Year by year I'm getting older.
My fingers are frozen, this water's colder!

Others have sunk, I see wrecks behind,
I'm trying to blot the images out of my mind.
You meet the eccentrics, age they've defied
And, I, ashamed, run off to hide.

There's so little time left, why can't I just die?
Some don't understand... they even ask why.

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  1. Date: 5/17/2009 8:47:00 AM

    This is such an excellent, and unfortunately it's life for many. However, life is still in a state of evolution and progress. Mindfulness should allow one to break the cycle of suffering. I like the essence of the poem. If you would also like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" in the blog section, dated Sunday, May 10, 2009, regarding my book. It also has great Epulaeryu poems. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 12/14/2008 11:13:00 AM

    This one was troubling and thoughtful with emotion. Well deserved to be a featured poem this week. Congratulations! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 5:42:00 PM

    Congrats on your featured write! Happy holidays! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 12/8/2008 8:08:00 PM

    congratulations on "Life" being featured this week. Vince

  1. Date: 12/8/2008 3:59:00 PM

    Very profound and deep, Kuwabo. thank you for sharing. Lainie

  1. Date: 12/7/2008 4:50:00 PM

    Kuwabo - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 12/7/2008 4:49:00 PM

    The emotion comes through your words on this one. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 12/7/2008 3:36:00 PM

    Kuwabo, yes in deed many ask why as I really enjoyed reading your creative writing style. Congratulations for being featured... MPK

  1. Date: 9/5/2008 2:19:00 PM

    This flows very well. I like your expressions. Your use of figurative language is excellent. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 9/4/2008 3:59:00 PM

    Interesting piece for reflection. Nice use of rhyme. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 9/2/2008 2:01:00 PM

    The rhyming sequence is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. Great job! ~Joseph