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the moment of choice

In unison, stars
wink and hum, "you'll never see
us clearly through tears"

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  1. Date: 9/19/2008 6:13:00 PM

    Nice use of personification to forward your thoughts in this poem. I like the idea of winking stars. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us. Best wishes with your writing. karen