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Stormy Night

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Stormy Night

Rain falling to the ground
Silent whispers all around
Pitter patter, pitter patter
Rain is falling all around
Warm and toasty by the fire
Sipping cocoa on the floor
Crickel crack, crickel crack
Cuddled next to the fire
Is the mother and her daughter
Crash BOOM lighting strikes
1...2...3...4...5...
The girl is counting, 
As her mother holds her tight
Soon the storm will pass
The sun will break the morning sky
Sleeping quietly next to burned out ashes
Is
The mother and her Daughter

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  1. Date: 2/12/2009 9:22:00 AM
    Thank you for all your wonderful comments, and just to clarify, this poem is about me and my mother, I'm the daughter, I only have one child my baby boy, Joshua Again thank you for the beautiful comments

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 11:48:00 PM
    Very beautiful poem, love the picture of you and your daughter that you painted so wonderfully..Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.God Bless*Tyesha

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 1:03:00 PM
    Congrats on your featured poem great imagery of you and your daughter! Laura :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 4:26:00 AM
    Congrats on being featured - Dad

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 2:02:00 PM
    This sweet poem is finally featured. Congratulations Sarah. Vince

  1. Date: 2/9/2009 2:02:00 PM
    I can hear the thunder, Sarah ... smile ... wonderful visuals with this one ... I almost felt like they might be camping!! Excellent write and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 2/7/2009 9:47:00 PM
    awe, how sweet. Comforting

  1. Date: 9/8/2008 9:58:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sarah . Please keep writing and posting your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poem today and hope to read more soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/25/2008 1:44:00 PM
    thank you for reading my true friends and for your comment i have read all of your poems that you have posted, and you are a gifted poet, you need to write some more, would love to read them.

  1. Date: 8/23/2008 8:07:00 PM
    i can actually see a daughter holding her daughter through a storm. very nicely written and i am glad that you have decided to share your work with everyone here at poetrysoup. kristina,15

  1. Date: 8/23/2008 5:22:00 PM
    First of all, welcome to poetrysoup. you have written a very warm and gentle poem and really enjoyed it, hope to see many more poems posted here.

  1. Date: 8/23/2008 5:42:00 AM
    I used to watch lighting storms with my little girl told her God was taking her picture lol great write and read loved the imagery in this one thanks for sharing keep up the great writting blessings to you and family

  1. Date: 8/22/2008 11:14:00 AM
    Hi Sarah Welcome to the soup here you will find a mix of wonderful poets that will bring to your new home. The welcome mats out! Great work! Laura :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2008 9:14:00 AM
    Hi Sarah, welcome to the Soup. Nice start. looking forward to reading more. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 8/22/2008 8:41:00 AM
    Hello Sarah...It's nice to meet you, and what a great father/daughter team to have on Poetry Soup!! You are a welcome additition to our circle of friends here. This was a lovely poem....I can picture my daughter and myself curled up together during a storm and after. I think all mothers and daughters should be so lucky as to survive their storms together! As I've told your Dad....I'm here in No. Calif., somewhere not far from where he lives. Are you my neighbor also?? .Keep writing! Carrie

  1. Date: 8/22/2008 8:09:00 AM
    Hi Sarah! A wonderful first poem here on the soup. The imagery was excellent and the mother/daughter bond was beautifully expressed. Hope to see more of your poetry soon. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 8/22/2008 6:25:00 AM
    Hi Sarah,It's nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Great visual imagery here! I love the rain, so soothing and makes the house nice and cozy. Though those Thunder and lightning storms can be a bit scary especially for young ones. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry in the future. Take care sweet! Love Light Truth Patricia You will be a blessing to all of us here at PS, just like your dad is I can see that!

  1. Date: 8/21/2008 9:18:00 PM
    Thats my girl - we got the father daughter tag team going on now - i am so excited about this and can't believe that we didn't think of it sooner. Everyone this is my oldest daughter Sarah who I am so proud of - You will love her for she is a beautiful soul