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I can't seem to concentrate
My life is all a flutter
Can't figure out the cause
Unless it's too much butter.

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    Date: 1/10/2009 11:10:00 AM
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    Ran across this one again and had to chuckle. Thanks for the day brightener! Keep on writing! Karen
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    john loving iii
    Date: 9/4/2008 7:57:00 AM
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    if it's cloged arteries and veins. it's the butter.jhl
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    Date: 8/20/2008 8:35:00 AM
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    Thanks for making me chuckle with this one. What an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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    James Foulk
    Date: 8/18/2008 8:22:00 PM
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    a very cute and funny piece, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my Rain at last and for your comment
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    Tracy Decker
    Date: 8/14/2008 5:48:00 AM
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    This is so great, Cile. I definitely know the feeling, and I think for me it's too much coffee. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. Thanks for sharing this! love.t
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    p sheart
    Date: 8/12/2008 11:46:00 AM
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    LOL! It's so goood to have you back. You keep me light hearted and laughing, good for the soul. Sending good thoughts your way hun. To cute smile! Love Light Truth Patricia
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    Heidie Buys
    Date: 8/9/2008 2:31:00 PM
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    Made me smile. How are you doing? Made me think of a nursery rhyme I always read to my daughter. Wash it down with a beer. Love Heidie
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    Vince Suzadail Jr.
    Date: 8/8/2008 12:51:00 PM
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    WHAT!! Too much butter! Never. Good to see you writing again. Vince. I was thinking of you and Billy when I wrote cowboys don't cry. God Bless. Vince
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    sharon weimer
    Date: 8/6/2008 4:37:00 PM
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    Well, if it's too much butter for you, it must be too much chocolate for me. Hey, we have to blame it on something! LOL! Cile, this is so cute! Love, Shar
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    Michael Jordan
    Date: 8/6/2008 4:31:00 PM
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    Cile - how are you my special Mother - I don't mean to nag so much but you had better watch the butter - Hey I went to go mail you that package today but my car wouldn't run some body left the lights on -oh yea I done that - when Toni gets home I'll jump it and tomorrow I'll get those in the mail - love you Cile and God Bless


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