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REMEMBER TO BREATHE

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REMEMBER TO BREATHE

So soon you forget me, when work comes in play.
Out of sight, out of mind while you're on display.

Didn't you say, this would not stress you out?
It is what it is; just a paycheck no doubt.

I can already tell you are working too hard.
Impressing the bosses who turned in your card.

I am still here when you remember to breathe.
Or hold it all in as you puff up and seethe.

 

 

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  1. Date: 7/13/2008 9:40:00 AM
    Attention seeking? We all need to breathe and ake the time for the important things. Vince

  1. Date: 7/6/2008 2:53:00 PM
    Yes, Astrid, we should make time for those we care about. All work makes Jack a dull boy.Nice couplet!

  1. Date: 7/5/2008 11:10:00 AM
    This is tough but well written. I hope things are great. glad to be back on the soup. Smiles from Lena

  1. Date: 7/4/2008 6:45:00 AM
    Oh dear, Too much pressure for someone? Hmm, hope things change for the better. Great poetic expression in this couplet. Wish it was for a better reason. Love ya, Shar xoxo

  1. Date: 6/27/2008 5:12:00 AM
    Ivy, hi! This couplet flows so well and describes well your caring nature, thinking of the other, expressing that you're there and offering advice. Wonderfully written. Michael

  1. Date: 6/27/2008 3:19:00 AM
    I have a seether, too...but he is not afraid to let it out! lol Very well done, love the last...Love Kristin