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Concentric Circles

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Concentric Circles

I’m here.
Holding up the sky

It will not fall on you
Not again
In these days once more
When you tell me you canna do it
Not again

Stuttering intakes of breathless oceans apart
Yet so close as to tingle fingertips
Gasping at familiar melodies of desert songbirds

The smell of earth after a rainstorm
Two thousand miles of trust
Between us

And the origin of this collaboration
Of souls
Back to the beginning
Of recognition of you of me and
Me of you and
      There is no end

Not this day
Nor tomorrows ever will I
Leave you

For I would cease to breathe.

For my Devin

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  1. Date: 2/28/2014 11:38:00 AM
    Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

  1. Date: 11/21/2008 8:16:00 PM
    Jelly bean what happened where did you go????? let me know your doing okay!!!!! big hugz J

  1. Date: 11/14/2008 5:46:00 AM
    Super title! So full of passion and desire. A beautiful dedication to your Devin! Best wishes, Keitg

  1. Date: 8/1/2008 11:32:00 AM
    well i hope devin enjoyed it. because it was a very heartwarming touching the inner soul. enjoyed reading it and you do have a gift, keep using it.