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Erosion 1 and 2

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Erosion 1 and 2

Erosion - 1

With a scholar eye I am looking at-

Looking at Sharpened Dream,
Burning heart burning across
Feeling the sour, feeling the layer

Is being wet tongue, gradually uncovered
vibrating lips and stick while mixing at liquor

-	A chemical compound searching for eyes
-	Searching liberty from sin
-	Burning the recipe of purity

I am chewing all the glamour with tortured eyes
Breathing fragrance; 

breathing easily passing days and nights
Easily

being tortured, told her- 
As its an erosion ; it’s a feelings


Written by Javed Akter

Erosion – 2

Sharp Sunshine ; I become anxious
sharpened me while it touches 
the ground

Like homeless lives I search forever
Blue ; blue feelings always
Walking around

Always sliding doors are crawling 
Crawling ever now and then

Kindly me; myself kind while waking up
After long night sleepless; sleeveless 
From deadly bed

Changing everything; changing backbone slowly
Steadily this side and that
Every time looking at decay

-Decay altering the sides

my feelings ; herself towards

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  1. Date: 11/9/2013 1:04:00 PM

    Hi, I am a fellow Bangladeshi writer, new in this site. Please check out my poems that I posted here. Please also check out my debut book “The Mystic Inferno”, available in Dhaka’s book stores. Let me know your thoughts. Greatly appreciate that. Regards, Obaidur Rahman

  1. Date: 6/20/2009 1:47:00 AM

    Thanks Crystal and other friends in the poetry soup for inspiring me. For Crystal : I am not that famous Lyricist Javed Akhtar from India, I am from Bangladesh. I usually write Bengali Poems.

  1. Date: 6/20/2009 12:50:00 AM

    This poem is reeli beautiful......!! Classy write....! this shows a great deal of proffesionalism and maturity......International piece of work....!! Condgradzzz.....! by the way javed, r u that famous lyricist from India??

  1. Date: 6/4/2009 3:00:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured> James

  1. Date: 6/3/2009 9:29:00 AM

    Congrats Javed on being featured this week. Vince

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 11:57:00 PM

    Co ngratulations on your poem being feautred and making it to the semi finals. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 10:40:00 AM

    Javed, Congratulations on having your poem, "Erosion 1 and2" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane"

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 11:50:00 AM

    Hello Javed, great job and best wishes in the next round. ~Joseph

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 9:45:00 PM

    Thanks all for your valuable supports. Hope i can make it more and more.

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 11:29:00 AM

    Javed, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 8:49:00 AM

    Good luck in the contest, Javed

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 7:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Javed. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 1:12:00 AM

    Thanks Friends for Your Valuable Support in my writing !! Hope you will post more details comments for me and my poetry.

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 9:57:00 AM

    Javed - Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round, best of luck in the finals – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 9:40:00 PM

    Wow...How very teen angst of you. Listen to The Used much?

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 11:35:00 AM

    Congrats Javed on your enchanting poem winning the First Round at the PoetrySoup. I wish you success in the finals. You are a talented poet. I quote a Quatrain from my book 'Rubaiyat of Josh Malihabadi -A Drop and the Ocean': Men who recite their verses profound/ And in their hearts conceal a bleeding wound/ Are insight and vision of worlds beyond/ Those who translate their thoughts in sound. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 1/13/2009 5:53:00 PM

    Very unique!!! Congratulations on your win, Jayed. lainie

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 4:37:00 PM

    Interesting format to share your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it chosen as one of the winners in the contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 6:48:00 PM

    Congratulations Javed on being chosen a winner in the September contest. Vince

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 5:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol

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