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Thirsty

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Thirsty

There was a spider webbing himself
an empire along my bathroom
walls.
It had sat there for weeks
devouring
everything
that happened along its web.

Feeling the thirst
come upon me one night
I left my bed, 
my wife & child,
went into the bathroom,
found that spider
& sat beside it for a few
moments.

There it sat juicing
some small fly.

After its meal
I smashed the life out of it
with my bare hand.
Its carcass glued to my palm
I went back to bed
beside my wife & child
still
thirsty.

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  1. Date: 12/26/2009 6:49:00 PM
    Thank you for your welcome comment, Joseph. I appreciate it. .. enjoyed the take on the spider "webbing himself an empire".Cool. The succinct description of it's sudden demise was interesting because of what it does to the reader . It is also interesting how this webbed empire drew in so many comments , is it not, Joseph? God bless you and yours -Robert

  1. Date: 12/25/2009 10:39:00 PM
    Awesome, viscious, cruel, simple, nicceee

  1. Date: 11/30/2008 6:01:00 AM
    Joseph - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 8:48:00 AM
    Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/1/2008 7:43:00 PM
    Joseph my friend how are you - Love your poetry - Congrats on making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

  1. Date: 10/28/2008 10:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/22/2008 3:34:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/20/2008 6:33:00 PM
    Oh, I was so with you and this wonderful write until you smashed it ... LOL ... I capture them in a glass or a jar and let them go outside ... Anyway, this is a great poem and congratulations on your writing being featured this week, Joseph.

  1. Date: 10/20/2008 6:13:00 AM
    I'm not a lover of spiders....eeek! But I enjoyed your poem :) ~ Congratulations on your featured work this week!! ~Carrie

  1. Date: 10/19/2008 9:54:00 PM
    Joseph my friend it has been far to long since we spoke - got 4 books under my belt and working on 5 and 6 at the same time - One is poetry the other is my first attempt at a Novel - I think of you often and you are always in our families nightly prayers - Coming up on 5 years clean - I love you Bro for the person you are - Love & Respects always, God Bless you and the family, Michael

  1. Date: 10/19/2008 3:56:00 PM
    Congratulations Joseph on this most interesting write being featured this week. And although I need to say "Ew, gross" I actually enjoyed the read. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 8/9/2008 9:39:00 PM
    this has depth and style with great imagery as well as flow,,great write even though may say silly,,,,blessings..cecil

  1. Date: 7/9/2008 8:31:00 AM
    Joseph - in prison I had a couple of pet spiders that I would feed the flies to - I can relate bro - Just wanted to say hi and let you know I think of you often - stay strong dawg