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liquid little stones

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liquid little stones

liquid little stones
skipping and skittering free
on shared umbrellas

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  1. Date: 12/18/2008 3:51:00 PM
    Rickie - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 12/17/2008 11:44:00 AM
    This is just the most awesome write I've seen about rain!! At first I was imaging lily pads as the "umbrellas" and then I realized you weren't talking about throwing pebbles into the water ... LOL ... what a great write and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week!! Congratulations. Hope you have a wonderful holiday and '09 is great for you!!

  1. Date: 12/17/2008 7:17:00 AM
    Rickie - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 8:49:00 PM
    I can see this so vividly. Well done! Lainie

  1. Date: 12/16/2008 8:27:00 AM
    Good image and feeling. Congrats on this fine little piece being selected. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/15/2008 5:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 12/15/2008 6:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Rickie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/14/2008 5:27:00 PM
    Another honor for this poem. It is wonderful. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/13/2008 4:22:00 AM
    Lovely, sweet haiku.