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Charred Orchestra

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Charred Orchestra

Breed the ignorant, let them forge corruption.
Seed-like, before cracking contortion causes height,
Slaves to distorted instincts.
Feed the undesirables commercialism,
Watch them turn to masochism

Fifty shapeless metaphors direct the fire,
Count the emerald paper for it emits immortality.
Listen to the composer synthesise idiotic flesh,
Let him label your enemy.

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  1. Date: 6/24/2009 10:29:00 AM
    I just realized that I never actually commented on this poem. Although you get better and better with every piece you write, this flawless masterpiece that goes back almost to the beginning is ridiculously amazing... it can still leave me breathless. I love you.

  1. Date: 6/19/2009 12:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on this awesome poetry being featured this week. Keep on going my friend. You are an inspiration. Ernilando

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 9:13:00 AM
    awesome--i want to congratulate you my friend for your poem being featured-charma

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 8:31:00 AM
    Congratulations Conor on "Charred Orchestra" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 7:56:00 AM
    Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 7:18:00 AM
    Conor,congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 12:26:00 AM
    Congrats on your feature poem this week Conor .Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 6/14/2009 9:48:00 PM
    Conner this is a favorite poem of mine because of not only the content but the way it was presented - wonderful poetry - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 12/14/2008 8:23:00 PM
    that is an excelent piece i really like first 3 lines , really strong imagery , thanks for the comment by the way, keep writing!!

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 6:40:00 PM
    Very powerful piece, the thoughts are captivating. Great Poem...Raul

  1. Date: 9/24/2008 2:33:00 PM
    Wow....Conor ...no hope for mankind at all..I felt sick for these poor souls...here is my call to arms Chrysalis Torn