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Contest Winners and a Short Farewell

Blog Posted by Carolyn Devonshire: 6/29/2014 12:22:00 PM

Dear Contestants,

The Past-Lives Contest has been judged and the winners are posted.  As I am preparing to leave for vacation, I will not be able to congratulate everyone individually.  There were some awesome entries and you all deserve applause. 

I will be spending time with my family for several weeks, but I’ll check back in whenever possible.  I’ll have wait my turn for computer time.

There had to be only one first-place winner as I wanted to offer a prize.

It turns out the winning poem was submitted by James Fraser.  James, I’ll need your address to send your prize.

Here’s his winning poem.  It was first on both my list and on my sister’s list.  (We co-judged.)

 

Arikara Born

by James Fraser

I like many others have lived in our dreams

In this world where I lived amongst forests and streams

Where the Great Plains stretched and our rivers flowed

If you could see through my eyes, how my tribe glowed

 

Born from my mother of Arikara descent

My father a Sioux warrior, his stature, augment

 

My growing up was no different than the others around

For the learnings that grew from our ancestors surround

Hunting and fishing, being told of the dangers in life

Cultural indifferences, to fearing tribal strife

 

But it's what my father taught me every single day

To learn from our lands for through the years they'd display

Tracking, seeking, searching, living from our lands

Every year more learned, growing in understand

 

From a boy to a man becoming a warrior through my years

Protecting what was ours, allaying modern fears

But the changes that we faced, suffocated our souls

There was only ever one outcome, other man's goals

I like many others, to live and eventually fall

Born from Arikara, Sioux, my name was 'Standing Tall'

 

Congratulations, James!  Your “prize” will have a Native American theme.

 

 

 



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Date: 7/7/2014 12:10:00 PM
- Congratulations James!!! - Enjoy your holiday with your family Carolyn :)
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Date: 7/3/2014 12:48:00 AM
Great winning write here James, I guess there was some tough opposition..' really good to read..'
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Date: 7/1/2014 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn, for sponsoring such a fun contest. Wishing you a wonderful vacation. bfn Elaine
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Date: 7/1/2014 2:02:00 AM
On behalf of Eileen and myself, thank you SO much Carolyn and congrats to ALL the winners and especially James...It is obvious why it was on the top of both you and your sister's list from the start...Enjoy your visit and GET WELL SOON - Tim
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:23:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, Thank you for sponsoring a contest with such an interesting topic. I really enjoyed writing for it, and I'm very happy to have placed! Congratulations to all of your winners!
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:25:00 PM
I loved your contest and reading the winners, hope you have a great vacation, enjoy yourself and hope you don't have too many soup withdrawls :)
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn for honouring my poem 'Arikara Born' in your 'Past Lives' contest. Having been on and off the Soup these past two years, I've enjoyed getting back into my writing. The comments here, and on my own poetry page have been wonderful. So it looks like I'm going to be around for the foreseeable future, James :)
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:57:00 AM
James poem was beautiful and heart felt, a good choice..thank you for my placement and enjoy your vacation,And here I thought living in florida was a vacation, as I live in florida too
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:21:00 AM
I'm grateful, Carolyn, for my placement, and hooray to James !! His poem was wonderful ! Do have a lovely vacation, Carolyn, rest and enjoy every moment, and we will look forward to your return!!
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Date: 6/30/2014 5:07:00 AM
I am pleased to see James getting so many comments on his wonderful poem. You deserve it, James.
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Date: 6/30/2014 5:05:00 AM
I just read James Fraser's poem and think it's awesome! I've always regretted the way American Indians were treated. But even today, they cling to their spiritual values.
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Date: 6/30/2014 1:16:00 AM
Congrats to James on his deserved win and sweet Carolyn have plenty of fun and rest on your vacation..Big hugs
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:27:00 PM
I was very happy to write for your contest. To have placed was an honor. Have a wonderful vacation and come safely back to the fold!
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Date: 6/29/2014 9:33:00 PM
Very happy to see you happy and healthy. Carolyn, wish you you enjoy happy and healthy life with your family. Thanks for my placement. It is a true story of a man who is a neighbour of my sister-in-law in London.
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Date: 6/29/2014 9:00:00 PM
I sure was wishing I could have done this contest, Carolyn, but my muse was not with me to help me know my past life. I read some amazing entries. Congrats to your winners and to your big winner, James. It's so great that you are back in full swing, I know you will return shortly!
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:22:00 PM
congratulations to all winners in your contest Carolyn. have a wonderful holiday, Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:10:00 PM
I Remember Commenting Upon This Shall We Say, Touching Verse ~ Just Finished Viewing A Piece About A Baby Boy From What They Called A 'Clovis, New Mexico' Territory Perhaps ? Dating His Life Around Thirteen Thousand Years Gone By A Native Of Their North America Civilizations ~ In His Infants DNA They Found Bloodlines Tracing Towards Asia ? The Most Stirring Part In This Article For Myself Although Was When An Elder Of Their Indigenous Children; Speaking Upon This Baby's Reburial Said: (Paraphrasing) ~ 'Now, We're All In This Together; Let Us Move Forward From The Heart'....Congratulations, James And Enjoy Your Beauty's Vacation Dear Carolyn....KLove *
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Date: 6/29/2014 1:29:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for sponsoring this contest, Carolyn. Though I don't believe in past lives, it was fun to take the challenge and collab with Tim. I'm grateful for our placement. :) I read the winning poem. Very moving. Congrats to all and have a wonderful vacation! :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/29/2014 4:11:00 PM
Dear Eileen, Tim is a great writer and your style blended so well with his. Congratulations!

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