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All Tied Up

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the haiku said..."straighten up, senryu!"...monoku

the monoku said..."have a sense of humor, haiku!"...senryu

the senryu said..."he's bipolar, monoku"...haiku

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  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:10:00 PM
    Ha, ha, are a riot. This was awesome! Hugs

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 4:34:00 PM
    haha this is brilliant!

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 4:06:00 AM
    WOW! You are GREAT! :) LOVED this!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:39:00 AM
    These are awesome :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:46:00 AM
    I'm taking a leap here. I hope you'll pardon me if I'm incorrect. I'm bipolar, and have written several poems about it. However, no reader thus far has picked up on it. That's probably my fault for being obtuse. Again, please forgive me if I'm wrong. In any event, fine writing. J

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:22:00 AM
    Awesome piece! Hehe Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:43:00 PM
    Hi Caleb, once again. lol... lol.... this is me talking to my brain... love this monoku... xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:38:00 PM
    Ha-ha!!! You are smart!!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Cute one..Got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 3:03:00 PM
    haha, these are clever!!! (thanks for your comments today)

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:36:00 PM
    - Yes, it should not be easily - Bravo! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:20:00 PM
    ha very clever Caleb...David