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Cool Spring

Cool
spring
stirring
in silence
beneath winter’s breath,
its eternal magic potion
which awakens strength, life, love, hope and second chances
It is a gift that is freely given- renewed life and redemption for all that breathe.
~*~

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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 7:12:00 PM

    like this vary much ,full of light

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:59:00 PM

    I've tried one of these writes before. What one usually fabricates is a pyramid-like poem. Yours is well written.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:51:00 PM

    lovely write on this unusual form - I think I've only tried the form once

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:23:00 PM

    this one is very beautiful, dear. I enjoyed your cool spring!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 10:44:00 PM

    Very nicely done.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:43:00 PM

    wonderrful and very creative,,

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:26:00 AM

    Top shelf Poetic form my dear sweet caring friend.. hugs Michael

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:25:00 PM

    Very breathtaking.......

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:24:00 PM

    Powerful work..Enjoyed reading this one today..The date on the comment was 2/21/2013..Sara

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 5:58:00 PM

    ‡ Hello Again, Sweet Beautiful Annalise ˜ I Love The Way This Reads When Reading It's Splendours Slowly ˜ Metaphores, Or Symblance Are Sooo Wonderful When Viewing Anothers Poetic Creations And I Find A Clarity Far From Abstract, Amid Their Brilliant Composition Her My Dear ˜ A Twinkling Of The Eye, Purifying, Seperating, Renewing; What Is Beautiful And Love Is Beautiful! ˜ Sweet Your Painting, As Sweet Your Beauty's Visit ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *