Critiqued Poems

one you

...your not the first to think it
others thought it to
not even first to say it
its been said long before you
that special feeling
you think unique
others felt it
long been critiqued
whatever yo...

be gentle

....

         i've never been
             critiqued...

The Poetic Genius of Percy Bysshe Shelley

...NN:
"Gemini, in light of the following assessment of Percy Bysshe's Shelley verbal and/or literary IQ and level of poetic intelligence and giftedness by you (from another conversation), how much hig...

More n nine months on

...More'n nine months on...

and still I feel infuriated at myself
concerning squandered funds
passively, senselessly, and willingly
surrendered nest egg
to computer hackers
(imposters, jackknifi...

True Poets should be Proud

...To all those who perpetually write, sometimes between conflicted thoughts are reeling. It’s not perspicacity in you that you should seek, but the validity of your true feeling. A poem that to you may...

ART

...ART

A esthete, I am for I love, love and appreciate works of art and
B eautiful things including alluring women and good looking men.
C reativity of the artists on display, being appreciated and...

I Hear He's a Winner

...Bolsonaro was president of Brazil from 2019 to 2023.
Former army officer and right-wing nationalist who revered Brazil's 1964–1985 military rule.
Jair Bolsonaro sought to arm a disarmed...

Chatgpt-4 Shockingly Rates One of My Sonnets a 94 Out of 100

...“ChatGPT-4, can you give me your literary opinion on the following sonnet? By the way, it is preambled by an explanatory prolegomenon which discusses the sonnet’s theme and my inspiration for composi...

Trappings of the Mind

...There a space in thoughts that we can hide.                   
 It's triggered by a word, an idea , a visual an action but none the less we  to find refuge.                                          ...

Everytime a Line I Begin To Write I Also Hear a A Sigh

...Everytime I begin to start to write

A single line

I so too also hear

A deep intake of breath sigh and sneer

Which fills me full of dread and fear

As I also in tern then see your eyes r...

Me In the Third Person

...Strange thought just entered my head
What if I critiqued my own poems
D'ya think I'd really be tough on myself
Or would you detect a slight bias tone

Tried using the criteria of accepte...

Don'T Reed

...Anxiety peak's as mundane attention seeks.
Fear and excitement compete as boredom seeps.
This powerful small action is not an option I possess.
My desire to please is within reach, the winner of a...

Fantasy

...You see,
Majority of my time is the concerned thought of,
You, with me.

A foolish fantasy,
A just and content concept of,
You, with me.

You see,
I’ve critiqued and brutally criticized myse...

Today

...Untaught vocabulary seems to retard
our insanity multiplied by free speech
which becomes nothing more then
profanity to the public ear when not heard
through the committed

Outsourced, spun and...

Our Uniqueness

...There is a world within our language that’s we’ve spoken since our childhood…
but when it is misused…does more harm than good.

DIFFERENT is the word and I wonder…wouldn’t it cause less fuss…
If ...

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