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MAGNIFICENT OBSESSION

Painted me a lovely vision
Of a dream.. made a decision 
Mirrored hues of just you and me
The painter's brush said it could be
Thus, you became my magnificent obsession

Contest: Nette's "Reflections Of A Florette"
Date: 9-2-14
Poet: Lyric Man

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  1. Date: 9/15/2014 1:21:00 AM

    remnids me of galathea...what great poetic mood, dave.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and hugggs!
  1. Date: 9/14/2014 3:29:00 AM

    This is lovely and romantic, Dave....especially the final line from which the title is derived. Congratulations! // paul
  1. Date: 9/14/2014 12:48:00 AM

    And back again wid huge congrats on winning magnificent obsession Dave!
  1. Date: 9/13/2014 10:36:00 PM

    Congrats, Dave
  1. Date: 9/13/2014 7:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Dave. Great poem.
  1. Date: 9/13/2014 6:39:00 PM

    Dropping back with my congrats Dave :-) Hugs Jan xx
  1. Date: 9/6/2014 12:26:00 AM

    That painter"s brush reflects a romantic masterpiece..Beautiful oil paimting upon the canvas of words.
  1. Date: 9/5/2014 9:39:00 PM

    I like that-a magnificent obsession- You painted well with your words. Best of luck in Nette's contest ;)
  1. Date: 9/5/2014 5:09:00 PM

    Love it! Beautiful write, Dave. I would like to see a strong ending line ... I think that the word "mission" changes the romantic mood ... I don't know ... I'm very dense sometimes. : D Have a great evening. Ruben.
  1. Date: 9/4/2014 9:07:00 AM

    Dave A charming and sweet write that touches the readers heart and allows the reader to see the desire in yours. Thank you for the funny comment on my Gift poem. You bad bad boy. LOL
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 9:23:00 PM

    I think this is 2 missions in one, you get the girl, and first place!! Dave this is A7 all the way, it doesn't get any better! Cheers
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 7:24:00 PM

    well constructed. beautifully expressed who could ask for more.
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 7:15:00 PM

    A man on a mission! let nothing stand in your way. I enjoyed your poem Dave.
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 4:17:00 PM

    nice one, dave! good luck in the contest...
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 12:00:00 PM

    Wonderful piece of work Dave. Good luck in the contest.
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 11:46:00 AM

    Beautifully done (7)
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 11:43:00 AM

    Finding your reflection within another soul, making it your mission to unite them.. ... Remarkable pen.
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 8:40:00 AM

    Oh wow Dave! Indeed a magnificent mission my friend! Best wishes in contest!
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 6:46:00 AM

    Mission Impossible? Not if you write like that, LM. Great write! Just a question...isn't it supposed to be about a mirror? Am I missing something here?
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 4:34:00 AM

    You have painted a wonderful picture Dave:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 1:46:00 AM

    Awesome Florette Dave. Verlena

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