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Made me smile - Comment Contest

A lovely comment I received
I treated it as fun
Surmised I was a girl from the east
With attributes per sun

Thought I might have been
delicate and womanly
As though I am not, for sure
I wonder if she thinks that I'm
A great big boring Boar

I know when she reads these lines
She will laugh and be pleased
That her comments made such an impression
That I could write these words with ease

So now I leave with my thoughts untold
To write more poetry, for you to behold.
Shall I write with pizzazz with a flare
Or just be boring me like my usual fare

For Jack's comment contest.



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  1. Date: 8/18/2014 4:25:00 AM

    Loved the humour here:-) Good luck with the contest.Hugs jan xxx
  1. Date: 8/18/2014 3:50:00 AM

    That's a very lovely write Seren! Good luck to u my dear!