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The Pool Of Emotions

Here I stand,
with my arms crossed over me,
I stare through the pool of tears -
at the reflection of my life.

I gather myself up
as I take a final breath.
I fall into the pool 
of my own emotions.

I'm drenched in tears 
that I have shed through the years,
I bring my head up to the surface, 
to the start of a new beginning.

With the rays of the summer sun 
shining it's positive light onto me,
and the birds flying above, singing
I always know everything will be ok.
Nobody stays in a swimming pool forever.



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  1. Date: 9/16/2014 5:48:00 PM

    Angel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
  1. Date: 9/14/2014 9:30:00 PM

    Angel, this is a really well composed write and I enjoyed reading it so much!
  1. Date: 9/14/2014 7:16:00 PM

    Hi Angel, what a deep powerful write this is! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
  1. Date: 9/14/2014 8:26:00 AM

    Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Angel - I choose your first moving written free verse - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)