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At The Pinnacle

Feet clamber the heights
Each pair of varied cadence
Eyes are on another’s feet.
Scaling the stairway
I focus on every step
Dead set on my arrival.

At the pinnacle
An old man sits on a throne –
He saw me and heaved his last.
Standing at the top
I feel old and the world turns -
Down, others enjoy the climb.

From the mountaintop
The waters rush to the ground
Seeping through bedrocks and plants.
Having reached the peak
I'll keep on the life cycle -
Seeking for the lower ground.

9.28.14

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  1. Date: 10/1/2014 8:31:00 PM

    Really inspiring, I love it!
  1. Date: 10/1/2014 5:41:00 AM

    Wow fascinating mountain climber's poem and imagery! Enjoyd the view. Hey i like yor name. Whr u frm? Pls do review my latest poem too.
  1. Date: 9/29/2014 9:35:00 AM

    Nice take on the theme, Luna
  1. Date: 9/29/2014 8:55:00 AM

    But what a glorious day to reach the top and enjoy the top of the mountain experience..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
  1. Date: 9/28/2014 11:58:00 PM

    Very inspirational this pinnacle moment of yours, much enjoyed the read xxx

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