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How Can One Recant a Kiss

How can one recant a kiss,
Or disignite a spark?
One might as well unhook the stars
And stumble in the dark.

T would be ill-favored to withdraw
So grand a thing as this,
Let passion play without regard
And forever hold, the kiss.


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  1. Date: 4/19/2014 3:31:00 AM

    :) love this.. :D sweet and heartfelt so romantic.. :)!! Have a happy day! :D! -olive_eloi
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 8:29:00 PM

    Very lovely and sweet, enjoyed every beautiful line in this special poem of yours, by the way HAPPY EASTER to you also, glad you enjoyed my comments and thank you for yours, cheri
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 7:54:00 PM

    Really like this, Mel.
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 7:02:00 PM

    I like this Mel..so torn...Tim
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 5:19:00 PM

    A wonderful poem Mel, I loved how it flowed.......Roger
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 12:32:00 PM

    Very nicely written Mel. Certainly a wonderful piece. Have great Holiday! And take care.
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 11:38:00 AM

    .... A sweet and nice poetry reading, Mel - Well written :)) - I like it!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 10:32:00 AM

    Clever, unique piece Mel!
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 8:02:00 AM

    Oh, so sweet, Mel. If only ... if only... :) LOL How have you been? I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Love and hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 6:55:00 AM

    You made my day with that comment of yours...and I see you don't need any "critique" yourself. I dream to write poetic like this. Very very talented. I love the tone in this write of yours..not too much and not too little. It leaves the reader wanting more.
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 6:37:00 AM

    Well there is a kiss and then there is kiss..Great expressive and descripitve work that you have penned in this one..I like the comparisons used ..I like the Poulter's Measure used in the poem as well..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 5:45:00 AM

    Mel, I really do enjoy your work, and I really did enjoy this one. You got some mad skillz. :-P
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 3:04:00 AM

    A smile....for there is no need for words on this lovely write. :)

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