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if my inner world


if my inner world

binds one light with moons in space...

I must be their child

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  1. Date: 7/23/2014 11:09:00 AM

    Amen to that! :)
  1. Date: 7/23/2014 10:08:00 AM

    If you can convey this sense of unity with all worlds here and beyond, you are surely a child of the universe. Supreme poem from your eternal pen!
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 10:19:00 PM

    Your work is so full of magic and beauty, you must be their child, no doubt:)
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 5:13:00 PM

    and if that child ponders the mysteries of the universe would she find the answers she seeks?...my first thought after reading your wonderful haiku
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 4:45:00 PM

    .. And if you were a Solar System your mind would be a magnificent sun star. And your heart, oh it would be a brilliant moon beaming, and on a night sky one could find such sweet delight in that radiant, mystic light. Nette, You are indeed nature's child!
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 4:10:00 PM

    Sweet moon child ,this is an exceptional haiku!!!
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 4:03:00 PM

    I really think you are the female version of Edgar Cayce or Tesla. This poem is way above the sky. Divine and out-of -this world, Nette. Clap, clap!
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 3:47:00 PM

    great haiku! .. :) and deep meaning poem! .. superb! ^_^

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