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Some comments from famous senior poets,
Few giggles from my younger poets,
And the day goes bright and is done,
And seems the whole world I have won !

And surprisingly a sweet tribute,
Leaves me wordless and mute,
Wow Heavens is this poetry soup,
Never knew existed such an amazing group,

Such a spirit of positive comments,
Creative learning and joyous moments,
Though never got some negative ones, 
But really am scared of shots and guns,

Sensitivity and emotions thy name is poet,
Negative comments are certain to cause hurt,
Why sadden someone at the end of the day,
If can't be positive, keep your words at bay!



August 20th, 2014
For contest 'Comments' by Jack Horne 

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  1. Date: 8/20/2014 8:23:00 AM

    What a beautiful string? Melody flows effortlessly. It's a winner.
  1. Date: 8/20/2014 8:16:00 AM

    Dr. Upma.. I couldn't agree more. Beautifully spoken!
  1. Date: 8/20/2014 6:12:00 AM

    I hope this makes poem of the week Dr Sharma!!!! the final line speaks volumes:-) Good luck in the contest POEM OF THE WEEK NEXT WEEK PLEASE Hugs Jan xxxx
  1. Date: 8/20/2014 5:19:00 AM

    Oh....that last line is just pure magic, Dr Upma...YES YES YES! Amen to that. Hugs!
  1. Date: 8/20/2014 5:07:00 AM

    Dear Dr. Upma, I'm so glad you have received uplifting and supportive comments. Your last verse should be on the home page of Poetry Soup. This is supposed to be a site for learning, sharing and growth. As my mother said, "If you have nothing good to say, say nothing at all." Wishing you success in the contest with this wonderful write! Love, Carolyn
  1. Date: 8/20/2014 4:03:00 AM

    - Anyone who has anything negative to say about a poem ....... should close his mouth - .... a "poet" without comments .... is like a garden without flowers :) - Enjoy reading, Dr. Upma! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great Wednesday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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