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FREE FROM MOOD - Blitz Poem

truth hurts
truth sets you free
free of stress
free to choose
choose wisely
choose family
family can’t be ignored
family sticks together
together we can succeed
together we will overcome
overcome your fear
overcome bias
bias leads to prejudice
bias can stifle
stifle your anger
stifle the lust
lust erodes values
lust exhilarated
exhilarated by success
exhilarated by environment
environment shapes us
environment must be revered
revered ancestors
revered doctrines
doctrines taught
doctrines enforced
enforced values
enforced slavery
slavery is abhorrent
slavery in demeaning
demeaning comments
demeaning laws
laws are shackles
laws protect
protect our inheritance
protect our children
children are trusting
children exhibit guile 
guile serves the wicked
guile hurts all
all are connected
all will become clear
clear eyes
clear conscience
conscience weighs heavy 
conscience sets mood 
mood swings
mood enhancing
enhancing
swings

Please see the blog regarding this poetry form: Blitz Poem
Robert Keim [http://voices.yahoo.com/poetic-form-blitz-5420951.html

In the example, the FINAL word of line 47 was used in the title, whereas some poetry sites on the internet, sites the rule that the FIRST word of line 47 must be used in the title. 


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  1. Date: 7/25/2014 6:41:00 PM

    Suzette, I am loving this style!
  1. Date: 7/25/2014 1:45:00 PM

    links in a chain coming to its conclusion,well done..this is the second one of these I've read in the last two days..both of them seemed like a lot of work

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