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ELEMENT OF WATER-BEARER


Unorthodox, this water- bearer rules,
an Aquarian god moody yet calm in the
face of persistent winds…his pail of wine
gushing on mouths of February streams,
like an outpour into first night’s cycle
of unpredictable moves, reigning for thirty
days to unfold like a river-in-waiting,
this heir of brazen stars: a cool dip 
born from rose-yellow...red, maybe for
hearts to quiver upon Cupid’s aim.

Oh, his vision is light years ahead of time;
breaking from clasps of tradition,
his maverick streaks defy life's norms
and ignites a Uranus heart to signal 
the rise of new dawning…and while he
dives into a crest of independence,
fool he is for needing warmth and affection.
Yet,a blend of hermit's pride and gentleness
dares the element of air to brew a storm,
then romances the lusty sea of love in a flash...
pray tell, how can one define a mystery?



Though I'm Capricorn, this poem is for my
dear brother, my former boss, Sir Tory, 
a special guy mate, and close buddy, Arno.
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Leonora Galinta's Poem With A Theme,
Zodiac Sign Contest
by nette onclaud  7/09/2014 

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  1. Date: 7/15/2014 10:03:00 PM

    A perfect poem for the Aquarians, excellent work...
  1. Date: 7/14/2014 3:27:00 PM

    wow, you really captured the essence of Aquarius. I am seeing so many based on that one sign already!! So you are Capricorn, huh? I bet you have water or fire for your moon sign then. You are not all EArth!! (thanks for the contest win, btw)
  1. Date: 7/12/2014 7:02:00 AM

    I love the contrasts you drew within the water bearer; proud and gentle, daring and romantic. Think you have another winner.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 10:56:00 PM

    Nette; I really like this. The storm romances the lusty sea. That is a great line. Good luck in the contest... Luycilla
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 6:44:00 PM

    Dear Nette: Words beyond words in lyrical perfume. Lovely magic. Enjoyed. Leon
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 2:48:00 PM

    You are light years away my dear, excellent write, luv xxx
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 1:59:00 PM

    One defines a Mystery by living it Nette. Your beautiful poetry is mystetious and awfully stellar! Perhaps he is not a fool, rather a desperate Legend. I quote the entire poem in admiration. I love the tempestuous maverick attitude. A FAV. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 1:50:00 PM

    Awesome work Nette! Aquarian the zodiac wud be so proud of u! Sure winner,, gl in contest!
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 5:43:00 AM

    Wow, your emotional tones just pour from Aquarian's fluid imagery, adding substance and impact for reader to experience. Genuis like the water-bearer!
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 7:16:00 PM

    Nette, what a beautifully descriptive poem about the Aquarian water bearer. Well done, your words flowed onto the page as his water from the pail.
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 5:20:00 PM

    Nette, how could one pick a favorite among your gallery of splendor.. It's beyond comprehension. But if it were possible this incredible write would occupy center stage.. At least it would in my eyes!
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 4:38:00 PM

    Geez, your poem is like a sweet drug. I got hooked on the magnificence of your eloquent perceptions of an Aquarian; I am one and your last line, a killer, Nette

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