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Brusted gree skirt the terrain --
its fortress now smog of pains.
Sprolled brave emoticons flurst
floppled by remorse.

Alive, lovely floriage.
no mercy, at once loafted!
Finentual world ethics 
forgotten clang cries.

Blind men sinduced to power:
justice then a fadograph.
Bescraped kindness ,dusten traits,
birthing woes and death.

Precious breathing counts one, two. 
In and out wheezing some help
Oozing damage marks hatred
Peace start when war ends.

(c) Olive ELoisa
August 20, 2014

from the list: smog, emoticon

from research:
brusted - Brown Broken and Rusted
gree - any number of green trees
sprolled - sped and rolled
flurst - flew and burst
floppled - fell, flopped and toppled
floriage - flowers and foliage
loafted - floated and drifted
finentual - final and eventual
sinduce - sin and seduce
fadograph - fade photograph
bescrape - escaped and broke
dusten -dusty and beaten



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  1. Date: 8/25/2014 5:58:00 PM

    Hi Olive, good on you giving this a go. I wouldn't even attempt this. I know but one language and that Is gibberish so I'd be down the tubes right away. My friends even say I can't speak English. You have thought out this one well. It Is good to see you trying so many different styles. Good for you my friend. Keep that gold glowing from your pen. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
  1. Date: 8/22/2014 11:05:00 PM

    excellent. just a delight to read. i am a theatre director at heart. writing is so out of my range. hard to control words i drive my work by my passion. as a director though i so appreciate your talent. God Bless and go girl go!
  1. Date: 8/22/2014 9:17:00 PM

    Oh wow....Debbie is going to love this truly grab this bull by the horns!!Yippee for you!!
  1. Date: 8/20/2014 10:22:00 AM

    I'm not even going to attempt this contest - I only speak English and gibberish LOL Great work good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx