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A Boat That Wouldn't Float

With a feeling I've come back home back to where I belong. I do sure hope some have missed me for that short time I have been gone. I took a side road on my way back down a different avenue in life. Soon realized I'd become lost took to many lefts, when they should have been rights. Thought I'd try something different creating silly songs with just some odd notes. Found out something was missing that was the feelings in the words I once wrote. Now I'm back home with all of you in this world I couldn't find a better place. Where the love that flows from peoples hearts puts a bright smile upon my face. Back home and once again ready writing words, instead of playing odd little notes. I do sure hope that some have missed me while I was off on a boat that wouldn't float.
Danny boy : 7-22-14 :o)



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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 12:23:00 AM

    Welcome back from your slight detour. I am looking forward to enjoying even more of your future work.
  1. Date: 7/26/2014 2:18:00 AM

    Sometimes in life, we travel down a path that just isn't right for us, and eventually our hearts lead us back to where we do belong.... Poetry Soup is a place that I hope to never stray too far away from!.... This is a very nice write, Dan. I really enjoyed it!
  1. Date: 7/25/2014 1:21:00 PM

    Very much enjoyed your verse! Lovely rhyming and message. Will look forward to read more from your waterproof pen. :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2014 1:32:00 AM

    Your words float my boat, nice one man. :0)
  1. Date: 7/23/2014 5:53:00 AM

    Great work Dan :)
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 3:41:00 PM

    Yes Dan you were missed by many,and your poem lingers like a breath of fresh air..Charma
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 2:30:00 PM

    Love it Dan....we could sure use some levity.... Tim
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 2:17:00 PM

    Glad your back..this is a clever little piece and now I hope your boat will float. Bg
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 11:44:00 AM

    Smile, So Sweet....KLove *