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Unfinished -

As
the hands
of time tick
away, the golden
days become nights, leaves turn saffron, and I
see the stars flickering light vanishes -
the dream to be
with you has
moved too
far. 

Yet, 
my love
is alive, 
rich, and ardent  
as ever as when you and I first found 
each other’s soul united that one night 
the silky green 
leaf still clings
to the
tree. 

Is
it just
remembrance 
when the leaf sways
with the wind as it hangs from the strong tree -
Is it just a shining star's memory 
I am feeling
this fervent
teeming
flame. 


10.21.14

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  1. Date: 10/29/2014 12:51:00 AM

    wow, this is so like my own feelings for someone in the past and many of my poems have this same theme. I LOVE this one, hija!!!
  1. Date: 10/29/2014 12:51:00 AM

    a seven!
  1. Date: 10/28/2014 5:20:00 PM

    I love this, you are a great poet. I am going to fav this add it to my collection.
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 10:55:00 AM

    Hija this is simply beautiful i do love the form I have never seen it before:-) Hugs jan xxx
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 3:17:00 PM

    Looking forward to the finished article, and based on what I've read already, it'll be worth it - Hija, James :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 12:57:00 PM

    I love what I see so far...let me know when you are done....hugs Tim
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 12:57:00 PM

    Oh Hija finish this it is beautiful:-) Hugs jan xxx

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