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How Can One Recant a Kiss

How can one recant a kiss,
Or disignite a spark?
One might as well unhook the stars
And stumble in the dark.

T would be ill-favored to withdraw
So grand a thing as this,
Let passion play without regard
And forever hold, the kiss.



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  1. Date: 4/18/2014 8:02:00 AM

    Oh, so sweet, Mel. If only ... if only... :) LOL How have you been? I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Love and hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 6:55:00 AM

    You made my day with that comment of yours...and I see you don't need any "critique" yourself. I dream to write poetic like this. Very very talented. I love the tone in this write of yours..not too much and not too little. It leaves the reader wanting more.
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 6:37:00 AM

    Well there is a kiss and then there is kiss..Great expressive and descripitve work that you have penned in this one..I like the comparisons used ..I like the Poulter's Measure used in the poem as well..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 5:45:00 AM

    Mel, I really do enjoy your work, and I really did enjoy this one. You got some mad skillz. :-P
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 3:04:00 AM

    A smile....for there is no need for words on this lovely write. :)