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GYPSY'S FEST



A gypsy dance enthralls the stars into a twirl of rustling hems as women tap bare feet...strummed guitars lift twiddling notes of lore’s anthems along a woodland’s lively fest, where beaded hair glides in thrilled zest to charm night’s hours...to romp away till wagon drifts when morning strays.

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  1. Date: 9/22/2014 8:17:00 PM

    You just painted a beautiful picture Nette I can see them dancing as I read. You are as Maurice writes a very skilled poet.
  1. Date: 9/22/2014 8:11:00 PM

    I just love what you can do with your words. There are several of you here that not only have the heart and passion of a poet but also a very high skill level. Not to mention an obvious love of words. This is a deep love for you this thing we call poetry. That is obvious. Thank you for the exposure of your love.
  1. Date: 9/22/2014 8:08:00 PM

    We are capable of amazing the stars as they astonish us Nette. Such a lively poem of the finest human spirit, women in personal twirl blossom, music and lyric alive on passion's flame, bare feet to earth, naked soul kissing the heavens, beautifull bodies of zephyr's fest...Mmmm...so pretty and wild. This is a FAV. Master Poetess! J.A.B.
  1. Date: 9/22/2014 4:59:00 AM

    Fabulous write Nette great imagery!
  1. Date: 9/22/2014 4:35:00 AM

    You must have witnessed a lot of Gypsy fests to come up with this highly descriptive poem that captivates the reader and make him see the fest himself, dear nette! Excellent!
  1. Date: 9/22/2014 3:49:00 AM

    Excellent. Well crafted poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 4:47:00 PM

    Captures the mood and mystery of a gypsy life
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 4:31:00 PM

    This takes me to a place of adventure, Nette...I can hear the "twiddling notes", feel the rhythm of their dancing! Enjoyed your beautiful Dizian, dear friend. Love, Audrey
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 2:11:00 PM

    nette beautifully crafted excellent pen
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 1:45:00 PM

    Sounds like a glorious time...hugs Tim
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 1:33:00 PM

    That would be a sight I would love to see at least once in my lifetime. Thanks for showing the thrill of it through your excellent writing. hugsxx
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 1:17:00 PM

    I like the gypsy in you gliding through melodious phrases and lit metaphors. I'm buying this one, Nette. Glad to be part of your recent contest. Thank you!
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 12:47:00 PM

    - S-mail - GYPSY'S PARTY ..... much glitters and big party !!! Great poem, my friend Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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