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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 2:01:00 PM

    The images of this poem are beautiful. I love it.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 10:00:00 AM

    I felt like I was floating above the clouds after reading this. :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:02:00 AM

    I love butterfly's and I am becoming quite fond of your writing as well Charmaine. The progression of the poem becomes the flight of the butterfly. T.Y.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 2:13:00 PM

    I missed this beautiful write...lovely..TAH

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:58:00 PM

    Very dreamy and romantic. I love the lightness this instils, yet a soft sensual longing exists just below the surface. Beautiful words =)

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:15:00 PM

    It is a shame you are not entering this beauty. Outstanding work! 77777.....

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 2:57:00 PM

    The imagery here is most ethereal. Well crafted!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 1:35:00 PM

    "And I feel it...". Yes, I could most definitely feel it, the fluttering of the gentle wings along my arm, as I read this poem! And, I could see it, with the wonderful imagery within this piece! Stunning work!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:32:00 AM

    Debs will adore where you took the topic of leaving on a jet plane. Very imaginative!

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 1:25:00 PM

    This is so heart-warming! You created such a wonderful setting. You don't know this, but one of the video games I'm working on is about 2 butterflies helping each other out to overcome the elements of Mother Nature. I kept thinking about my game as I read this. I definitely enjoyed this!

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 12:06:00 PM

    Deb will love this....it brushes so lightly the theme of the song.......it is just what she has asked for. I hope you enter it!! Beautifully written !

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 6:31:00 AM

    Aw It's beautiful Charmaine! I thought I read that you were going to enter her contest ... i think you'll do very well. I love your writing.

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 4:27:00 AM

    WOW ALMOST TAKES THE BREATH AWAY BEAUTIFUL PIECE FLOATING OF THE PAGE

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 9:17:00 PM

    A beautiful poem. I love the last two lines... Jack

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:38:00 PM

    butterfly bliss....well penned....thank you so much for your kind words.....

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:33:00 PM

    Beautiful, my dear. Simply beautiful....I love butterflies.... :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:21:00 PM

    ..Seems As Though This Butterfly Crossed Paths Perhaps, With Her Tinkerbell, Sweet Beautiful Enchanting Charma Charmaine ~ Tis Where There They Then Kissed In The Most Spiritual Of Sense *)(* `A Butterfly's Ballad` ~ I Am Going To Favour Her Beauty And Thank You For Your Lovely Kind Visit As Yes, One Can Only Imagine How Precious These Tiny Eyes; Flesh Of My Flesh Spirit Entwined ~ Love Always, John

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Hi Charma, I hardly ever come down to the new poems.. I'm glad i did! Love the ballad, beautiful wings. A special, and lovely write. I give the title an A+. Never thought or read a butterfly's ballad. Sweet & Sensual in the loveliest way possible. adding this to my favorite list. xox~ LINDA