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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Catherine, I am very sorry for your loss. I hope you find solitude in the fact that everyone here loves you. ~Kilmer

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 11:12:00 PM
    You have expressed your heartbreaking pain beautifully in this poignant piece. I love children and can't imagine your loss. So sorry that happened to you. It sounds as though you are being divinely guided and that is a blessing. Love,

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:14:00 PM
    sad...

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 12:12:00 AM
    Very sad very beautiful loving poem, glad you shared it.

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Catherine, I am so very sorry for your loss. I too have lost a baby and my life has never been the same nor will it. You wrote beautiful and I pray you continue to write and I thank you for sharing with us.

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Please keep your nasty comments to your self...do not visit any of my poems again...

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:43:00 PM
    Will the moonlight ever been kind to me? Outstanding but been should be the word be. Women are so highly related to their children in poems that they write. It is scary sometimes to wonder if what is in the poem just may be true. Jim Horn

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:39:00 PM
    That is what I wanted to hear about my poem. You people are fast. While I was changing it you were already analyzing it. Check out corrections I have made. Also, feel free to make recommendations any time that you want to. I really like this website and my poetry writing has been improving everyday. I did just put this poem together under short notice when related and syncopated came to mind. Writing poetry and improving are a continual process. jthorn5656@atmc.net

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 2:47:00 PM
    I too, will add my comments to Tim and Andrea's below,, this is so sad, so tragic, your poetry as a beauty of it's own, one that will help the reader, especially those also who have lost a love one....

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:28:00 AM
    oh, my, tim said the right word for this one, heart wrenching and a very touching one. I'm sorry this happened to you. This is very good writing, dear.

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 12:03:00 AM
    Heart-wrenching and beautiful at the same time...Vivid description of the grieving process...So glad to have come across your poetry this evening Catherine...Keep writing! - Tim