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A Tear Fell

Lips to kiss away
a tear of a mighty man,
finger tips that track
the cheeks of his sentiment
hint’s of the love in his heart.

© Harry J Horsman 2013      

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Love this one. ~soup mail~

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 2:15:00 AM

    Harry very beautiful poem poet

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:13:00 AM

    Harry back for a re-read of this beautiful write...David

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:17:00 AM

    This is absolutely beautiful and very touching, my friend! Kudos! Have a great day! - Jack

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:44:00 PM

    your short poem conveys a lot..Thnks for yur comment on "lost' am new on poetrysoup i need your precious comments..

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 6:54:00 PM

    Ahh!! Enjoyed the sentiment of this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 6:58:00 AM

    Dear Harry, Aesthetically romantic, tenderly provoking the heart! Thank you!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 6:02:00 AM

    "finger tips that track the cheeks of his sentiment" Nice.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:17:00 AM

    I can relate.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:26:00 PM

    Oh my! This is very moving Harry. A great portrayal of the love that resides in your heart.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:49:00 AM

    Harry your amazing in your poetry. Your words come from a place where a poet is born. Wishing you a great weekend and thank you for commenting on my poetry as well. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:49:00 AM

    It's a fantastic magic of words penned where there's nice game of love. You can bind sweet feelings in words, you are an expert master to do that I know. Thanks for your kind comment, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:01:00 AM

    Oh yes Harry...'Lips to kiss away a tear of a mighty man'...can't be put any better than that...have a good one my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 6:57:00 AM

    Hi Harry, just checkin to see if you've posted anything new... I'll check out some of your older ones I've missed. Hope you have a lovely day!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:21:00 AM

    Hi Harry superb word my friend, love the love here, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:32:00 PM

    Dear Harry, a lovely image and feeling... one kiss and touch can bring the best, in new love...xox~pd

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:16:00 PM

    Interesting work, Harry. Very heartfelt, to see the tears of any man. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:40:00 PM

    Let me dry your tears darling, I can't stand to have a sweet man like you be sad. Tomorrow will be better I promise. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:09:00 PM

    Harry; This is great. A mighty man can cry too. I told you once - there is nothing wrong with that. Have a great V. Day - just don't eat too much candy. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 6:47:00 AM

    How absolutely dreamy and romantic! Wonderful write, Harry! :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 5:54:00 AM

    very nice Tanka Harry....best wishes

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:08:00 AM

    Harry... exquisite....David

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 3:44:00 AM

    Just wonderful written, Harry - Have a sweet heart day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 3:30:00 AM

    Harry, a tear of a mighty man. Nice mix. you are a mighty guy. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. TC

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:34:00 AM

    Everything has been already said Harry.. One very fine Tanka my friend. :o)

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:58:00 PM

    This is beautiful Harry....

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 8:45:00 PM

    Harry, I don't want to be too redundant by mirroring the sentiments below, but this is a very heartfelt and romantic tanka....my favourite style of tanka. You do great with the romantic, romanticist, and humanist tanka and senryu.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:05:00 PM

    Ohh, so sweet and adorable. Love it, Harry!

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Aah this is so sweet and so nice,. I love your write dearest poet Harry...:) enjoyed so much<3 Happy Valentine my dearest one <3 :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 4:11:00 PM

    A simple beauty is what this Tanka is, Jack...straight from the heart. Always, Annalise

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