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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:39:00 PM

    very nice David ;}

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:39:00 AM

    This one made me think.... Love it and FAVing it, David. Glad I read it. Love, Su

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Very nice image. Enjoyed much! Thanks for commenting on mine. - Sean

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:00:00 AM

    You have the elements of spring and death all in the same haiku... interesting! Though halfway creepy I sense it's more positive than anything... the dead coming to alive because we now know that they were here... excellent haiku!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:07:00 PM

    David, What a chilly little gem you've got here!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:38:00 PM

    Creative and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for your visit to my work..Your presence was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:27:00 AM

    I have always enjoyed your haiku....volumes said in this haiku...

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 6:15:00 PM

    Like the message in this one. Hope it is true. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:42:00 PM

    I really enjoy good haiku, and this is a very good one. Nice imagery. J

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:28:00 AM

    Wonderful haiku enjoyed, my friend. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:06:00 PM

    Great haiku! Spring = Life Reborn.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 6:58:00 AM

    Love this David!Very good haiku.

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 6:36:00 PM

    This is really good..wish it were true. We don't have snow, we have dust and dirt. But, I like it very much..very clever..xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 1:49:00 AM

    Hi David great visual impact, but now hiding under the stairs in case any zombies pass by, have a great weekend my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 8:22:00 PM

    ..:-) ....Hola... David, stopping by to bother you and say HIIIIIII! always~ TEX

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 2:55:00 PM

    "i am the resurrection," saith the Lord When the soul comes forth... great haiku David mate...

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Cool David...very cool

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:56:00 PM

    wow, this is just awesome, David - love it. Hope you and Geraldine are both keeping well

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:42:00 PM

    All except Ebenezer Scrooge, eh? Good Haiku, DAve - my favorite form. I take it back. I guess his name on the tombstone did save him. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 11:37:00 PM

    oooohhhh, this creates quite a picture in my mind, David!! an eerie one!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:12:00 PM

    I love this.

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 2:53:00 PM

    Hello David, wow... now this image took me 2 ways,,, once upon a beautiful nature ((came back from the dead)) back again,,,,, Then I had the zombie image of the bones unfreezing, after all the snow was gone... always~ TEX

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:47:00 PM

    great one!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:53:00 PM

    Images nicely constructed and placed together, David... Very good! Terry

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:14:00 PM

    ooooh! This is a fine, chilling one. Great work! Love it. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 11:59:00 AM

    Just the thought of being replaced with a head stone.....

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 10:08:00 AM

    love the imagery David,, so apt is this wonderful Haiku...,

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:00:00 AM

    I really like this, David. An excellent haiku! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 5:32:00 AM

    Creative post..Nearly haunting.Depending in che vista one sees the dead...Different ..and i like that about it..Charma

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:53:00 AM

    Oh wow.......David! so simple, but impact was awesome. Thankyou for this very clever Haiku - Shaz