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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:03:00 PM
    Wow...excellent writing!! This gave me a chill of goosebumps !! I was held in suspense until the last line. You have told an excellent ghost tale within this poem. Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:26:00 AM
    Cyndi - genuinely creepy - which I hope was your intent. My tummy took a turn. I love the rhythm and rhyme on this one. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:04:00 AM
    This one reminds me of an old movie I've seen on TCM !! Intrigue....I want to know more !!! PS.......finally seeing your contest results.......did I ever thank you for your kindness in placing my poem? It is always an honor....especially knowing what amazing poems you, yourself grace the Soup with so often! Thank you!

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:56:00 PM
    I really like this one, a haunting one that feeds my love of the supernatural. great rhyming and meter. Just wonderful, Cyndi.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 1:50:00 PM
    Oh now you've done it I want a short story telling how and why he killed her! [re: 1,2,3,4 war -yes hon I am an old hippie, almost old enough to be a flower child ;) and I was against the Vietnam war and barely out of college when the national guard killed those kids] the things folks forget aye? Light & Love [any post card yet?]