Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 1/22/2014 3:39:00 AM
    I just had to read this Lori - it reflects how I feel sometimes. That feeling when you wish for once you'd have something good to write about and you take a pen and the words that come out are filled with sadness and grim pictures. Well written poem.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:41:00 AM
    hi my dear friend Lori.. hw are u ??indeed this is a very pretty poem for me dearest poetess Lori,, i luv this wonderful write...:) enjoyed reading your great work sweet friend :) <3 <3 <3 SK

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:02:00 PM
    Very well written. No garden of eden here, but that is OK. At least we can still laugh. Smog attack power? You're onto something! The items you pick are very funny. Sounds like you've experienced all these things. I here Mars is nice.

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:20:00 PM
    Wow this was really good:)I like the line "for inspiration I walked barefoot in the grass but wouldn't you know it I stepped on glass" It really has a sense of great irony of your thoughts. I enjoyed this Please keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more from you!!

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:35:00 PM
    Ha,ha..Very nice. :o) I know what your going thru there.Looking for the beauty,but only finding the beast...

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 11/29/2012 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry