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Tasting Bliss

maybe... It will be good to wake up dead...one morning not to feel the body, the sense, the emotions ..anymore tast of immortality waking up..maybe ..on a harley or on a horse, galloping, no stirrups riding bareback,..the highway..a place neither heaven nor hell A rolling highway between the two a wingless flight into some destiny.. no more the body caged within the spirit the attempt no more, to live the earthly urges shunned by life's abomination scrotched by flame of searing scorn this freedom of not thinking at all, I cherish no longer the thought of survival no clamor, yearning none.. into oblivion sink relationships the passion that consumed tender love that sought..to bloom struggling with circumstances attempting to bamboozle time with tast of reminiscence affections tingling fantasies fancies that simmer, like a fire waiting to conflagrate into a bright flame.. from the sanctity of sanity to the stirrings of inner soul a quintessence cherished with a passion for verve.. freedom the confines that bind from being a slave to "time" the luxury of loosening the inhibitions the beginning of bliss~~~
For Delilah. 16/11/2012

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  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:12:00 PM

    CONGRATS!!! love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 1:24:00 PM

    Spellbinding and mesmerizing...Congrats - Tim

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Yasmin, Congratulations on your sweet awesome free verse win.... you poem rocks... :-) Linda

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 4:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Yasmin, I remember this one and it still holds xx

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 5:41:00 AM

    Congrats dear on your win with this and many other wins too..have yourself a great time in the holidays, here only one day off for daughter, no Christmas vacation.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:21:00 PM

    Yasmin, very positive statement howw one may recover from the abyss of a bad relationship, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:08:00 AM

    Congratulations Yasmin ...Seren

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:08:00 AM

    You are so skilled Yasmin, congratulations love xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:04:00 AM

    Being able to write such a piece is the greatest prize you can win - the poem IS T H E prize This masterpiece brings you a fantastic bonus: a prize - many congratulations(this is another one) and also a lot of readers........ ENJOY every second of it! :-) Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 4:29:00 AM

    What a powerful write Yasmin! quite uplifting and spiritual in nature, when we experience that state only then we know dear how it feels. Congrats on a most deserved win!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 11:52:00 PM

    Amazingly written Yasmin! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:26:00 PM

    A well deserved win poem, congratulations. -A poem to be proud of, very well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:25:00 PM

    Oh this is so very very deep, Yas....wow, I am moved with tho't at the questions u ponder....congrats, Yas. Great job!!!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:22:00 PM

    hi hi Yasmin,,, , ;-)congratulations with your "Dictionary fun" winning poem... most enjoyed~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:51:00 AM

    Needed another dose of Yasssssss so I found this profound deep piece.. Your amazing my dear Poet genius... may I be so bold to say luv Michael

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Amazing and so profound with you're thoughts Yasmin love it!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 1:07:00 PM

    Wow, I truly love this incredibly wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this vastly phenomenal and intriguing poem this afternoon! What a delightful and highly stupendous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 6:06:00 AM

    I had to take me a cup of black coffee to this poem Yasmin ... Deep thoughts ...... But you say, "maybe" .... Well written. - Wish you luck in the contest. - And hope your weekend will be great. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 4:46:00 AM

    wonderful write Yasmin,love it