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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:15:00 PM
    Like a beautiful song, very deep with a hint of sadness. William Morrissey.

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:52:00 PM
    This has a sad tone...perhaps a story behind it?? There is just something about a daydream remberance that never ends or ends with a sigh.... Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:09:00 PM
    JonStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 11:42:00 AM
    I'm a symphony?... Hey don't worry I'm back... LOL.... Sorry I couldn't help myself!

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 8:15:00 AM
    I feel this piece in many ways....well done my friend... Michael

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 7:52:00 PM
    Good imagery. Simple enough to let our imaginations soar.

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 3:51:00 PM
    Beautiful and serene, John...I had to read it twice. Excellent write! Always, annalise

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:12:00 AM
    A good one, my friend John... remembering a lost love? Cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 8:56:00 PM
    Not sure what the disaster was but it sure ended, maybe too fast. You've got a bit of a roller coaster going here John and the message has great emotion going on. Nicepicture with so few words. Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 6:42:00 PM
    very sad but beautifully written...

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:24:00 PM
    Wow,Very nice! So much said ,with so few words...

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:46:00 PM
    this is indeed a wonderful poem, the depth of feeling shout out of this poem....

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 11:00:00 AM
    Deep and touching daydreaming .... John. - A well written poem. - - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)