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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 3:45:00 PM
    breath taking..

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:33:00 PM
    The first time that I read this poem, I found it to be different from your other poems, yet you maintained your distinct inner poetic voice, throughout. A very elemental poem -- for me, the ending softened-up the ?darker?, almost forlorn aspects in some of the lines. And still, even now, there is a periphery of mystery within the lines, which is always a plus when it comes to good poetry.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 2:24:00 PM
    Hello, Christine. I've not checked your poetry lately. The last time I visited you, I fav a wonderful erotic poem, but then you left the Soup deleting it. Im glad you're back.

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    Date: 10/20/2012 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ignis as in fire...(I guess)... fire consuming everything....devouring life...or at least destroying its passion. You're activating my few neurons! LOL! This voice is buried (alive?)searching for fire (passion?) The body parts puzzle me...I'll be back.
  1. Date: 10/20/2012 11:38:00 AM
    A wistful feeling of empty or lonely or some piece of life missing.