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Carol Sunshine Brown
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Fall
green grass in the past
cool air feels so refreshing
changes to atmosphere
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/11/2013 9:22:00 PM
Carol, i'm reading this one again... and I like change.... maybe new will be refreshing.....xox~LINDA
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/8/2012 8:06:00 PM
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harry horsman
Date: 10/3/2012 4:00:00 PM
powerful Haiku Carol, awesome message...
adelaja olayiwola
Date: 10/3/2012 4:18:00 AM
wao! This reminds me of my modern biology. Most especially the topic deforestation. How men polluted the enviroment by their actions killing the plants, burning the land and lot more. This is a materpiece i agree. Long time mentor! Best wishes to MY poemMUM! LOVE, ADELAJA...
daver austin
Date: 10/2/2012 10:32:00 AM
Thanks for reading my stuff, Carol. Good Haiku. good strong image and conclusion. daver
Carlos Mongrut
Date: 10/2/2012 10:13:00 AM
The final upcoming of fall ... Loved it! :)
Al Beech
Date: 10/2/2012 6:52:00 AM
Nice
Jancarl Campi
Date: 10/2/2012 4:47:00 AM
Ahh, yes fall is finally here. I am pleased that summer is finally over. Of course, the grass stays green and grows in the south. I am happy we have a gardner to cut our lawn. Thanks for read my recent work. Take care, Jancarl
Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2012 3:58:00 PM
Finality expressed with this one..Enjoyed reading your very creative work..Thanks for stopping by..I see on TV that it might really cold in a few days in the area where you live..Sara
Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 10/1/2012 3:50:00 PM
great setting..... appeals to the senses Victoria
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/1/2012 3:35:00 PM
Hello, Carol. Just here to say have a nice day.
Joe Maverick
Date: 10/1/2012 1:52:00 PM
Enjoyed the cool air of this write Carol
Bradley Cox
Date: 10/1/2012 1:30:00 PM
You describe fall very well , thank you
nette onclaud
Date: 10/1/2012 12:31:00 PM
superb 'ku, carol... i love how you describe the changing seasons with such eloquence..:) huggs!
Leonora Galinta
Date: 10/1/2012 9:27:00 AM
A well-written haiku giving me a very wonderful vicarious experience of fall season! Congratulations my dear friend, Carol! Thank you so much for your precious time giving me your inspiring and warmth congratulatory comments on my wins!!! Have a blessed and grace-filled day/ time always! love and hugs:) Leonora
Ralph Mason
Date: 10/1/2012 7:31:00 AM
nice poem! cool air is coming here in Canada. warm thoughts, Ralph
Joseph May
Date: 10/1/2012 7:22:00 AM
nicely written Haiku Carol...enjoyed...thanks for stopping by...love...Joseph
Yesha Shah
Date: 10/1/2012 4:22:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku with calm refreshing imagery Carol. Loved the read.
Effie Blake
Date: 10/1/2012 12:50:00 AM
Well, since looking into writing another poetry book, I thought I'd take a look at what's new for you. It's haiku about one of the more romantic seasons. Good job:)
Al Beech
Date: 9/30/2012 9:17:00 AM
Like your haiku and your subtle kigo with cool air
bl devnath
Date: 9/30/2012 1:54:00 AM
Real philosophical Nature's haiku. Loved and enjoyed. Always bl
Suzanne C. Goudreau
Date: 9/29/2012 9:48:00 PM
Wow, an excellent well-penned haiku...I can feel the chilly air. Awesome write.
Jack Ellison
Date: 9/29/2012 1:59:00 PM
I know autumn is a gorgeous time of the year but I'm so going to miss the warm days of summer! Canadian winters can be so frigid... love and hugs, Jack
jack horne
Date: 9/29/2012 12:52:00 PM
lovely haiku, Carol - thanks for all your sweet messages. Have a wonderful weekend x
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/28/2012 2:23:00 PM
Yes, this is how it is feeling RIGHT now in my state, Carol. you got it!!
Gwendolen R.
Date: 9/28/2012 2:18:00 PM
This is ahhhh so refreshing...enjoying the mild weather but not the frost that's coming to stay! :)
Gail Angel Doyle
Date: 9/28/2012 1:06:00 PM
I love it Carol, thanks for sharing a beautiful Fall poem. Love always, Gail
Sukmawati Komala
Date: 9/28/2012 10:22:00 AM
very fresh and nice write..luv it much Carol <3<3<3 SK
Russell Sivey
Date: 9/28/2012 6:56:00 AM
I love this approach to the Fall changes we are experiencing my friend! I just love the cool air and the changes to the atmosphere which you so eloquently described within your clever little write Carol! I really enjoyed your wonderful write, I love it, Great Work!!
