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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:22:00 PM

    Carol, i'm reading this one again... and I like change.... maybe new will be refreshing.....xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:06:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 4:00:00 PM

    powerful Haiku Carol, awesome message...

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 4:18:00 AM

    wao! This reminds me of my modern biology. Most especially the topic deforestation. How men polluted the enviroment by their actions killing the plants, burning the land and lot more. This is a materpiece i agree. Long time mentor! Best wishes to MY poemMUM! LOVE, ADELAJA...

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:32:00 AM

    Thanks for reading my stuff, Carol. Good Haiku. good strong image and conclusion. daver

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:13:00 AM

    The final upcoming of fall ... Loved it! :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 6:52:00 AM

    Nice

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 4:47:00 AM

    Ahh, yes fall is finally here. I am pleased that summer is finally over. Of course, the grass stays green and grows in the south. I am happy we have a gardner to cut our lawn. Thanks for read my recent work. Take care, Jancarl

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:58:00 PM

    Finality expressed with this one..Enjoyed reading your very creative work..Thanks for stopping by..I see on TV that it might really cold in a few days in the area where you live..Sara

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:50:00 PM

    great setting..... appeals to the senses Victoria

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:35:00 PM

    Hello, Carol. Just here to say have a nice day.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Enjoyed the cool air of this write Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:30:00 PM

    You describe fall very well , thank you

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:31:00 PM

    superb 'ku, carol... i love how you describe the changing seasons with such eloquence..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:27:00 AM

    A well-written haiku giving me a very wonderful vicarious experience of fall season! Congratulations my dear friend, Carol! Thank you so much for your precious time giving me your inspiring and warmth congratulatory comments on my wins!!! Have a blessed and grace-filled day/ time always! love and hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:31:00 AM

    nice poem! cool air is coming here in Canada. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:22:00 AM

    nicely written Haiku Carol...enjoyed...thanks for stopping by...love...Joseph

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:22:00 AM

    A beautiful Haiku with calm refreshing imagery Carol. Loved the read.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:50:00 AM

    Well, since looking into writing another poetry book, I thought I'd take a look at what's new for you. It's haiku about one of the more romantic seasons. Good job:)

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 9:17:00 AM

    Like your haiku and your subtle kigo with cool air

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:54:00 AM

    Real philosophical Nature's haiku. Loved and enjoyed. Always bl

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 9:48:00 PM

    Wow, an excellent well-penned haiku...I can feel the chilly air. Awesome write.

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:59:00 PM

    I know autumn is a gorgeous time of the year but I'm so going to miss the warm days of summer! Canadian winters can be so frigid... love and hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:52:00 PM

    lovely haiku, Carol - thanks for all your sweet messages. Have a wonderful weekend x

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:23:00 PM

    Yes, this is how it is feeling RIGHT now in my state, Carol. you got it!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:18:00 PM

    This is ahhhh so refreshing...enjoying the mild weather but not the frost that's coming to stay! :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:06:00 PM

    I love it Carol, thanks for sharing a beautiful Fall poem. Love always, Gail

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 10:22:00 AM

    very fresh and nice write..luv it much Carol <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 6:56:00 AM

    I love this approach to the Fall changes we are experiencing my friend! I just love the cool air and the changes to the atmosphere which you so eloquently described within your clever little write Carol! I really enjoyed your wonderful write, I love it, Great Work!!