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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:24:00 PM

    Wow what can i say just beautiful..

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 7:18:00 PM

    very deep and touching write..JL

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 3:48:00 PM

    Very moving... at least there is some hope ... in the end... Terry (good poem; and thanks for your kind comments, and especially for your perserverence, wading through so many words... the most flattering was that you seem to have 'picked up the rhythym...')

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:53:00 AM

    Oh....great flow, fine messages and very visual. NICE....what can I say Dan :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:25:00 AM

    very inspiring poem..luv it Dan..and yes we all have to do our best ...<3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 8:59:00 PM

    I love this poem. It is one of my favorites. It reminds me of one of my own. That will all need to change - to aspire to be the best will can. Great write. HPM

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:55:00 AM

    This is huge. Something we all should want to aspire too! Helluva write Dan!

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:49:00 PM

    Hi Dan the man brilliant my friend the only word that will do, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Great poem! Very well thought out... and from deep within the soul.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 9:40:00 AM

    wonderful poem, Dan, so profound, touches one here, having read this.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:34:00 PM

    Are you crazy!! why would you delete this!! I think u did a wonderful job ... have a wonderful day cory

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:10:00 AM

    Sweetie, can't imagine you being a problem ever, try looking in the mirror and see that impish face doing so much good. What would we do without you?

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 10:10:00 PM

    Aww..this was very touching. All your poems are heart warming. thanks for this. Keep shining your light dear poet! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 7:32:00 PM

    Enjoy this day, this time, this place! A beautiful, thoughtful verse. Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 12:53:00 PM

    We shall all meet our end someday. While we are here, enjoy life as much as we can. Good write Dan.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 10:25:00 AM

    When the day comes, we all will make up for us. Hope we meet at the "pearly gates". But .... there's a lot I want to experience before that. Great poem - well written. - oxox love f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 9:42:00 AM

    This is beautiful and honest, Dan! Why would you delete it? I'm faving it so don't you dare!! I have a finger pointed at you and it's shaking...LOL. But seriously the best poetry comes straight from the heart. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:13:00 PM

    this is heartfelt and I see talk of deleting it? Don't do that, Dan!!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:36:00 PM

    I think its quite beautiful..why delete? BG

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:04:00 PM

    I think rather - words from the heart; spoken, and released, free to become all that is meant to be. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 2:51:00 PM

    I think I need to delete this? Hmmm?

    Wulf Avatar John Wulf Date: 8/27/2012 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nope, you don't