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Autumn's Beauty

sprinkles coming down
raining upon my parade...
rustic colored leaves
cool breeze is blowing
smell of fireplace now burning
apple pie baking
popcorn with football
raking leaves and fresh cider
autumn born again

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:29:00 PM

    wow... re-born...love the beauty.....xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 12:10:00 PM

    I'm not a pro either, but I still enjoy reading poetry. In fact, if any of us were pros I doubt if we would be here. Nice poem by the way. I wish I could have some of that apple pie!

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 7:15:00 AM

    You have a great job here. Autumn is one of my favorite Seasons. Thanks for sharing Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:52:00 PM

    MMMMmmmm...delicious haiku form. I love Autumn and now I can almost feeel it coming on. Wonderful write!

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:57:00 PM

    Love the way you divide it to triple haiku. This is really great. Marvellous and stunning work. I loved it Khalid

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 4:40:00 AM

    carol, thank you-i love nature.

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:24:00 AM

    Ahhh!!I just enjoyed reading this one..That apple pie was just what I needed..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 1:31:00 PM

    i love it............. autumn is my favorite season for billion stars of her night

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Wonderful imagination pictured with sweet words, enjoyed. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:29:00 PM

    you captured everything about the season, Carol. Good luck in the contest. I think it deserves a win.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 4:58:00 PM

    Oh, Carol, you have kept the fire burning inside me about the Autumn months! I truly love this time of the year and everything it brings with it! You ingeniously brought forth tremendous aspects of the fall, a wonderful feel about this time of the year! You brought a smile to my face my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:59:00 PM

    Love the last lines sentiment. I titled mine Auburn Spring. Which is not unlike your last line. Good luck. You described autumn in it's simple perfect essence.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 9:35:00 AM

    fantastic write Carol...enjoy your great work:) congrat for the contest :) luv SK