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Emotions Of Death

From darkness to light~~ And a surgeon's knife Slapped by the doctor....hung upside down Bloodied,shrieking,red in the face Shaken to the very depths,of the core The first wail,a wrinkled face Grey amno in the head...a bloodied body in a booby trap...thoughts of a genius screams of lunatic...death of coherent thought** ouch!there goes the umbilical chord Hanging on to the threads of sanity streaming my corpuscles, thrown into an insane,chaotic world into a delirium of volatile cogitation a dark abyss of sleep conception of conscious perception A sudden prick,a feel of pinch from syringe A buckshot..... Demoralizing optimistic threads of tumultous deliberations liquidify silver streaming through the frontiers of the brain,spattering a potential surge,unable to dyke this outburst,a sense of alienation.

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:16:00 AM

    Yasmin, amazing images and phrasing! Congrats!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:51:00 PM

    Yasmin... congratulations with your awesome deep and darken poem* GOODNIGHT!!! xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 4:04:00 AM

    Very deep thoughts and write. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:53:00 AM

    What a very explosive write Yasmin! And what powerful phrases used here. To me this seems the trauma of birth rather than death, birth by a C-section. Tell me dear, have I got it right or not?

    Shah Avatar Yesha Shah Date: 7/21/2012 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thats a wow!
    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 7/21/2012 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    pure imagination.
  1. Date: 7/20/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Wow...Yasmin, the powerful words you have penned here is dynamic! This is a truly gorgeous poem my friend! My favorite line has to be, "Demoralizing optimistic threads of tumultous deliberations" this paints the perfect image into my mind! So many twists of meanings put here within this line! What a uniquely wondrous piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:40:00 AM

    wow, so many images of pain and death in this one. A very dark write. But very descriptive and interesting to read, my friend. Hope you had a lovely day. I am going to my Friday movie soon! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:13:00 AM

    Yas, wow. it's like trying to keep up with a machine gun firing, I like it alot, well done and good luck..David

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:39:00 AM

    mareey, a description of the inner workings of the character's mind so disturbing but beautifully rendered... you wow priya!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:14:00 AM

    The phrases rattle me a bit. But, a very nice write. tho portraying a macabre scene:( Jag

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:12:00 AM

    Oh..Yas,very deep and dramatic read:) Best wishes if for a contest! See ya`:)

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 8:39:00 AM

    Deep poem with indepth lines..I think for that death and insanity contest>Enjoyed the read Yas.Best wishes to you.