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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Yasmin, amazing images and phrasing! Congrats!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:51:00 PM
    Yasmin... congratulations with your awesome deep and darken poem* GOODNIGHT!!! xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 4:04:00 AM
    Very deep thoughts and write. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:53:00 AM
    What a very explosive write Yasmin! And what powerful phrases used here. To me this seems the trauma of birth rather than death, birth by a C-section. Tell me dear, have I got it right or not?

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    Date: 7/21/2012 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thats a wow!
  1. Date: 7/20/2012 1:13:00 PM
    Wow...Yasmin, the powerful words you have penned here is dynamic! This is a truly gorgeous poem my friend! My favorite line has to be, "Demoralizing optimistic threads of tumultous deliberations" this paints the perfect image into my mind! So many twists of meanings put here within this line! What a uniquely wondrous piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:40:00 AM
    wow, so many images of pain and death in this one. A very dark write. But very descriptive and interesting to read, my friend. Hope you had a lovely day. I am going to my Friday movie soon! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Yas, wow. it's like trying to keep up with a machine gun firing, I like it alot, well done and good luck..David

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:39:00 AM
    mareey, a description of the inner workings of the character's mind so disturbing but beautifully rendered... you wow priya!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:14:00 AM
    The phrases rattle me a bit. But, a very nice write. tho portraying a macabre scene:( Jag

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:12:00 AM
    Oh..Yas,very deep and dramatic read:) Best wishes if for a contest! See ya`:)

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 8:39:00 AM
    Deep poem with indepth lines..I think for that death and insanity contest>Enjoyed the read Yas.Best wishes to you.