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Overcome by your...
shivering cold rancid breath
Death lies beside me
3rd Place Winner Brian Strand's Contest # 183 June 2012

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:40:00 PM

    wow.... a deep one here.....xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:52:00 AM

    wow this is powerful Carol...

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 6:19:00 PM

    Very good keep it up caro.

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 1:42:00 PM

    Carol I'm loving the form. You are really working it.

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 9:44:00 AM


  1. Date: 7/13/2012 8:07:00 AM

    Short and sweet! Loved it! :)

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 2:54:00 PM

    dear carol i appreciate all your comments and find your writing outstanding. yet i just write what i feel and don't feel polish with grammar and other matters dealing with the critque's of writing. God bless You with energy and strength to continue your inspirational acalades of poetrysoup writers.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 8:46:00 PM

    Awesome, I say you got a placement from Brian with this one. Congrats, Carol.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 3:29:00 PM

    Thank you Carol. You are indeed a talented poet.

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 10:40:00 PM

    Wonderful write. Well said. tfs

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 7:28:00 PM

    Carol you don't have to say sorry about anything. You can only do your best here. I sometimes cannot come here and I get so behind, but that is life! STay well. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 10:37:00 AM

    Thanks for your comment and yes like you I have been super busy and so behind on the soup. the traveling to babysit 3 days a week and then 2 days at the shop for my other son has this mom going full tilt. Hugs an congrats I see you won the contest. awesome. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 2:06:00 PM

    wow, can feel the dread

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Hey Carol, hope you had an awesome week, enjoy the weekend ahead.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 7:57:00 AM

    Wow! Congratulations, indeed! that is awesome.

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 4:57:00 AM

    I love this poem. In just three lines you said so much. I read it and actually shook. Congrads on your win. And thanks for reading my new orleans poem. Take care, Jancarl

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 5:47:00 PM

    So boldly and to the point it

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 5:32:00 PM

    powerful to say the least Carol! congrats to you

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 1:42:00 PM

    A poem so inviting. Congratulations, Ms. Carol and thank you for welcoming me here. Regards!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:02:00 AM

    grats on winner it sounds very creepy and scary i liked it very much its always nice when people dip a toe in the darkness

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Congrats on you win Carol..beautiful written poem and thank you always for your comments!!!

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 7:24:00 PM

    Just stopping by to say HI,CArol.

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:10:00 PM

    I can feel the coldness of Death in only three lines. You created a great atmosfere, my dear friend! Love, iolanda Thanks for your comment...

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 4:17:00 PM

    We lye in wait for the grim reaper. As we hope they don't dig deeper. So we may still rise up to heaven. Unlike the bread that is unleaven. :)

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 3:19:00 PM

    paints a picture S C B, none are lovelier than just thee

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 12:52:00 PM

    Nice, well done. Thank you for your kind words Michael Eugene

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 7:34:00 AM

    so glad this beauty was a winner and thanks for all your kind comments, Carol - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 1:51:00 PM

    Hi Carol high time I read you again congrats on your win liked this, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 9:38:00 AM

    Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 11:00:00 PM

    ... thank you-awesome!