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  1. Date: 6/12/2012 1:22:00 PM
    So many fantastic lines here...Great metaphor brought to life with such vivid imagery...A most intriguing poem that I can relate to on many levels.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:11:00 AM
    it has been a while since i have read such defining metaphor, john... this is amazingly penned; so primival!!.. i am beginning to enjoy your kind of poetry... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 2:42:00 PM
    What I've been waiting for! To hear your interpretation of living in the desert is like going to another world where the fantasy of life in that forgotten place captures heart and soul. Honestly John, this is so beautiful; I think it is now a part of you in the deepest sense. Lucky you to have experienced something I can only dream about! Luv, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Hi John. I love it but I can not say:WoooW for WooooW is used before.....Bravo.....well done!!! - Have a lovely week. - :) oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:13:00 AM
    what a strong emotional pull, john.. i like!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 11:45:00 PM
    oh that was fantastic, like Dan said 'Wow",also going into my favourites list

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 10:52:00 PM
    All I can say is Wow!...Again! You said so much there...I read it over,and over again. I'm gonna have to make it a Fav...Great write!