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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 5:31:00 AM
    you really bring out how it is Marlon,, such truth and so inspiring..amazing poetry...

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Hello Scribe, , a beautiful blessings with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent day... I know I sure am. :-) or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:18:00 PM
    Nicely done my friend. You have this ability to create passion. Very passionate poem congratz poet

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 3:06:00 AM
    Nice work, your good at this. and im happy some poeple still take the time to give God glory for His works, after all . . . such is our destiny

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:31:00 PM
    Astounding and Beautiful. I'll rate this an eight if I have to! ,v.v, But I can't. oh wells. 7 has to do. BRILLIANT

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:24:00 AM
    Marlon, Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 1:15:00 PM
    BEAUTIFUL... eye's filled with tears. You have a gift that is heaven sent and It is not to often I come across such heaven on earth! IN AWE...

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 1:39:00 PM
    Filled with awe at this piece...another brilliant write sir :)

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 5:27:00 PM
    I really like this one. Even better than the first one. Is it based on fact or fiction? I would like to think it is a true story for the emotion you conveyed with it. Great writing.

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:57:00 PM
    another lovely write marlon

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:22:00 PM
    this was astoundingly beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing this artful masterpiece. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 4:40:00 AM
    i like the emotional approach here , marlon---happiness and the protection of love and then pain and final surrender... the power of lamentation and imagery are heartfelt! grrreat write..:) huggs and blessings!

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 10:03:00 PM
    Marlon, the heartfelt continues.. I feel the loss,, your words give a very touching image.. the glow of a smile that follows us.. and you.. A very lifting thought at the end of your poem.. everything awaits.. . enjoyed stopping by ;-) good night, * always PD

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:54:00 PM
    Beautiful, the last two lines really captured me. Thanks again for sharing, the truth resonates strongly in your words.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:52:00 PM
    WOW,This is truly stupendous.Thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 12:44:00 PM
    It is beautiful Marlon... Be strengthened in the Lord my friend... Love Diana

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 8:55:00 AM
    This is quite a story Marlon, deep, emotional and then the ending brings a wonderful conclusion of healing. Loved the way you told the story! Lizzie

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:21:00 AM
    now that is some follow up...David

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:16:00 AM
    yes, those who have passed on have ascended unto the lord. God Bless. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:01:00 AM
    Many sensible opinions and a very strong poem. One of the best I`ve read in a long time Marlon. Have a lovely week. - oxox love Anne-Lise