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  1. Date: 11/30/2011 6:53:00 PM

    Feels like a dance that wants to be happy but just can't quite make it. Fascinating!

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 6:42:00 PM

    I dig enchantment and kindness and SOC glimpses, nice post, JW, namaste ~N

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 1:04:00 PM

    I like this one John. I call it almost but not quite. And what I mean by that is just when it starts to form itself one way, it transforms into something new. Almost one thing and but not quite that before it moves in a new way.

    Wulf Avatar John Wulf Date: 11/30/2011 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tony you are very perceptive...this actually morphs into another whole write in progress that extends to my father and who knows what else - the piece started in stream of consciousness and I attempted to corral it prematurely. We'll see where it goes someday. Thanks so much for your comments and input, I value your words and wisdom. My pistole has a habit of going off half-cocked - might explain all the holes in my foot:-)
  1. Date: 11/30/2011 12:28:00 PM

    I really like this one John.It kinda reminds me of myself.Nice job... :-)

    Wulf Avatar John Wulf Date: 11/30/2011 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Dan, I think of you in the "enchanting spins" category:-) your words often enchant me.