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  1. Date: 1/22/2011 10:54:00 AM
    Your last three lines sum it up perfectly Stephen... Really love this.. Hope your weekend is a good one :) Wilma

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 5:24:00 AM
    U can view my blog Stephen about the winners from Spicy contest for men only luv.. congrats again.. with luv..

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 6:56:00 PM
    True to life messages in these " I don't knows" Stephen, smile! either way there is a potential to crash and burn. This last line is a killer, man! Keep writing. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 4:39:00 PM
    Perfect analogy and true insight, Gentle Fury! TGIF! Have a great weekend! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 4:15:00 PM
    Falling in love is a thrill, but there's always the danger of getting hurt, Stephen. Maybe that's why people find it hard to establish relationships. Once I fall in love, it's hard for me to say goodbye. That's me you describe going too high off a ski jump. Great poem that seems to fit the moment now. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 9:40:00 AM
    Stephen, I really enjoyed this one and the picture you portrayed of falling in love like the crazy skier jumping too high. Great writing, my friend!

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 8:28:00 AM
    A wonderful analogy Stephen with luv and the ski jump... great perspective thinking on this set of lines .. such a deep parallel.. all of us who have been or now are in luv can truly relate to that feeling of emotiion u have penned so well my friend.. happy weekend... always a risk when u take a chance on luv..

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 5:42:00 AM
    The feeling of being late nicely explained, Stephen