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~Night Sin~

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~Night Sin~

~          innocent            

~     whiskers in the dark 
~      body of a lioness 
~       sweet devouring

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 1:37:00 AM

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:05:00 PM
    The second line is masterful. You should be proud. This is well done. You seem to have a natural knack for this form. Thanks and regards from Gerard.

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 8:03:00 AM
    IN response to your question, well, your dodoitsu was for the spicy contest, right? and Spicy means sexy, so YES, this is a compliment. Just look at your comments below: Wow, erotic and ravenous, those are meant to imply "sexy!"

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 5:19:00 AM
    wow, this is sooooo goooood!!!! glad I stop by to look through your work...always Michael

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 10:02:00 PM
    wow, sexy like your dodoitsu (whatever thatspicy one's form was called)!

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 9:54:00 PM
    again....ravenous good!!!! jimbo

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 9:23:00 AM
    Excellent Haiku! Enjoyed the read this early evening!...Gert

  1. Date: 12/30/2010 6:42:00 AM
    excellent and profound, love this. Harry

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 8:01:00 AM
    Very erotic ... you really move this one across the page of imagination

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:42:00 PM
    Makes me think, this one does!! I see you really love your haiku!

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 7:26:00 AM
    This is an excellent haiku, perfect form, powerfully expressed imagery within so few lines, a pleasure to have read for you indeed my friend... Keep that creative pen flowing ;-) Many Blessing, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 11/20/2010 6:41:00 AM
    Wow! What a fabulous haiku. Very intense and descriptive. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 4:27:00 PM
    Passionate and raw with beautiful meaning behind your creative lines.. Hathor .. a perfect title to complete the them of your creativity tonight .. appreciate your warm and welcome comments on "BLEEDING" luv... happy weekend..

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 1:52:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 12:27:00 PM
    This is great, and welcome my poet friend to the Soup...always Michael

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 12:25:00 PM
    thnx Hathor for visiting my poem, "HE is welcome ever....." and leaving encouraging comments. Luv/best wishes......Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 12:18:00 PM
    A sweet write with sin in it's title.. Loved it Lin Ra ;)

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 12:03:00 PM
    Great expressive work..I enjoyed the subtle voice in which you speak..I was delighted that you stopped by my work, read and commented..Glad that you enoyed..Sara

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 12:21:00 PM
    Nice sweet hunt =(^.^)= Royal

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 11:27:00 AM
    Hater, This is a wonderful Haiku! I so enjoyed reading this today. Thank you for this As Always, Shar