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Waves Crashing Against My Heart

I nestle comfortably in the sand, Sitting next to you, hand in hand. A cool breeze, and salt in the air, The wind picks up and whips around our hair. The stars glitter and shine so bright, I'm glad we decided to go out tonight. Waves crash violently against the sand, This is the most romantic night you ever planned. So simple, yet so full of thought, I'm sorry earlier that we had fought. I see that you're a love so dear, I also know that I need not fear. As we sit on this white, sandy beach Its the sound of peace that we seek. Lay me down and gently kiss my lips, Place a hand on either one of my hips. A sigh of content escapes my mouth, As we stare at the constellations to the South. I wish this night could last forever, As we journey on our new endeavor. Sadly, it won't, but that's okay. As we enjoy ourselves on the beach we lay. What is it about the ocean that makes me at peace? With each wave, my calmness, seems to increase.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/9/2009 12:10:00 PM
Many congrats on yur featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 8:41:00 PM
Congrats Wicked....It is a lovely write from you!!! I love you and am proud of you!!! Love Evil
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:50:00 PM
congradulations on getting featured on the home page with your wonderful piece Aleera. yours John H Loving III
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Date: 12/8/2009 5:37:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here, Aleera and a wonderful selection to be featured this week at PoetrySoup. Congratulations!!
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Aleera. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2009 3:46:00 AM
Great rhyming couplets with much emotion, expressiveness, and descriptiveness. Congratulations on being featured. The negative ions when one is close to moving water as the sea, ocean, creeks, and rivers causes the change in our bodies to feel at peace. Great for people who are depressed etc. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/7/2009 5:07:00 PM
Dear Aleera, Congratulations on YOUR POEM " Waves Crashing Against My Heart" being Featured this week You have captured the Ocean's Heart with YOURS A very pleasant evening Superbly defined ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:59:00 PM
Hi Aleera, congrats on your feature poem this week! Enjoyed. Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured Aleera>> James
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:42:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 4/9/2009 10:04:00 AM
I can actually see that!!!! OMG I can. The funny thing is I see Illy there too!!! I love your work...you are still better than me!!!
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Date: 4/8/2009 6:25:00 AM
omygoodness! Aleera! incredible couplet! the best I've seen! and thx for commenting on my work! jmg
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:04:00 PM
great rhyming and story telling, you pulled me and my imagination into your world. John H Loving III
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:16:00 AM
excellent couplet! your words so full of love and hope ... ~ Arany
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:17:00 AM
Wonderful write, I enjoyed the ending...Raul
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