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Fading Will

Time passing many things left still
The clearness fades each day, I think
I’ve been robbed of a once strong will
Shattered, pushed to the very brink

So many dreams once held inside
Time passing many things left still
Hope has left, no place to abide
What will bring one final appeal

What can change to bring heal to heel
The question pondered many nights
Time passing many things left still
Life blurred in the sea of night lights

A dream stays alive but hidden
Sometimes I think it won’t reveal
Joy a thing that is forbidden
Time passing many things left still

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:18:00 AM
    That was deep!

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    Date: 12/11/2013 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I really need to thank you double, for allowing me to revisit some of my work, and for your great work as well. Thanks again for the comment.
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:28:00 AM
    The words seem to fade away as I kept reading. I imagined the words getting softer and softer in my mind as I was reading each line. Amazing work. This is very touching and sad. I like your repetition--thought it was a great effect. Keep writing, man. You're really good in my opinion. I'm no critic, so I'll just leave it at that! (: Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:27:00 AM
    Wayland, this is deep having your will up and leave without a notice. But, somehow I think we are responsible on keeping the will and joy alive. Love the depth of your poem. Many can relate with the deflation of wanting to hang on. Anyways, reading your poem has me realizing, on my own faded will.... well its more like Smokey. gray... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:54:00 AM
    Wayland very well written, I like it...David